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OMG! If you end this story in two chapters then I will personally kill you! I won't let you do it! I love this story and I want it to go on for as long as it can. It is in NO way shape or form lagging! Your plot is going perfectly! I think you are a wonderful writer and you write great stories; please don't end this fic anytime soon! Keep up the good work and thanks for asking us readers for our opinion.

And I don't care if your story has humor or not. It's great either way. It is nice to have humor in the story, but it's also nice to have a serious side to it. Just try to do a bit of both

hey... i really like your story and for some reason, i have never reviewed it before, for which i apologize. i actually read your story from mediaminer.org and i dont review much and sometimes when i do, i review once a day out of every story i read. i know i shouldve reviewed sooner but i dont know why i hadnt before and im sorry. i will try to review as much as i can for your stories. i really like reading this story along with your other hiei/you stories from e-fiction.org. i like how u write your stories and every story i read by u is one of the best ones. i hope you update soon

Your story is great! But add some humor for comic relief here and there. And it is just a tad bit long to me. But hey I like it and I'll continue to read it! Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

^_^ I love it. I think it's great. I especially love fanfictions that are long. They keep me occupied because... >.> Well let's face it I have no life and have nothing better to do now that my friends don't have AOL anymore. So I think the way the story is going now is perfectly fine. I love and I hope you choose to keep it up. ^_^

Hm. She may be right. There are several plot facets going, and this work does seem to be "straying from the tracks" slightly. Don't get me wrong, I love this story, but sometimes you can have too much of a good thing, if you understand my meaning. Still, I love to read this and am, myself, a novelist by nature (or so I like to think).

J.H.

I like how you're doing it now and I don't think you're drawing it out too much. I say continue the way you're doing it now, but then again I'm not you. It's your story and your choice.

I love reading long fics and I especially love the great amount and effort and detail you are putting into it. I would love for you to keep on writing as many chapters as you want. I hope the others feel the same I do, and if not, could you send me some of those chapters? I would love to read the entire story you have written down, and if it's not already written down, then the stuff that is in your head. I love this story! Thank you for listening to my request and thank you for having concern for your readers! I hope you will still continue this story.

For my two cents.....I don't think your story is dragging on...There are small elements missing from it at time...but, they can always be adjusted into the story at later points. I personally like the humor that I read so far. I read stories with than the chapters you are aiming for...and not every chapter not be pack with exticement, but they were neccesary for the plot.....In the end, the choice is yours to contince with the story or not...I hope you do...I would like to see how things end with Hiei, me and the pups.

hey, i would love the story to be longer, if it just ends like that it wouldn't be any fun!
that's what i think,i love the way the story is going , so far, i have no complaints(sp?)
i love it, can't wait til you update

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