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i loved it, i can't wait to see what happens next! i wonder if hiei is gonna catch us. i hope he does so he catch us, because i want hiei to kick his butt! lol, um...... to do the fanart i'm gonna need some basic info. what color is my hair, the color of eyes, and how big is my belly. is it like medium, little, or kinda big.....oh, and how long is my hair..., is it half way, very long up to the ankles, or up to my butt, or i don't know you tell me,...lol.....
oh should i make a lemon one to spice things up a bit or should i make both mild and lemon, it would be my pleasure.
i don't care what i draw as long as i draw something....lol, well e-mail me with the info.
thankies!
^_~

OMG rai is a BASTARD!!!!!!!!!! do i get to kick his ass? plz let me kick his ass!!!!!!!!! please! update so i can find out. PLEASE!!!

ja ne
nyoko kuro
black gem

"I do enjoy reading your fanfiction, and I am anticipating when you would continue. I find nothing wrong with your writing style, actually I like how you explain the ways of a pack. I myself is a wolf person that loves Hiei. Do cointinue with the fanfiction, and I will continue with the fan art that is being created that you asked for. Arigatou."

Hiei Lonewolf

I didn't mean to cause alot of comotion about my review, although I didn't mean to be brutal (so sorry if i was, i really do love your work) but im glad you'll be thinking about the main point more. And i appsolutly love small funnies, they make stories the best ^__^. More funnier scene's would be great. The situation with 'you' and kurama is what was really my big worry, it makes me nervious to think that maybe 'you' thinks alittle to strong for the fox demon, i think you need to lighten up there friendship and study more so on Hiei's relationship with the main charactor. Now I don't mean for you to completly ditch the other charactors (that would make a boring story) but center stage should be on hiei and me. I knew you'd make this long, but with the path your at now i dont see your story ending 'completly' within 20 chapters, and the fear of people loosing intrest might arise from this point to that. Your creativity and inspiration as a writer (as well as your story structure) is supurb, as a writer I know you'll get signed once you put yourself out there, but you need to show the 'big shots' who have the real power what kind of a writer you are. I must say, if you are working on anything (or plan on doing so) you should (within your own pace) put yourself in the eye of those 'wonderful' (ha) publishers with those oh-so wanted contracts ^__^. I know you'll do great in this harsh world, if your anything like your character (draw away from the fact she got herself preg.) I feel as if your a strong person who knows what they want from this world of ours.

Now, before I start writting you a teary-eyed 'i love you ametank' (as a writter, hehe) review (like everyone else) Im ganna say one last thing............GOMEN, LOVE YA ^__~

Im SO glad your not mad at me, thats a big relief (I dont want you to hate me, I love you)
As for the art thing, since the very begining of this story ive been sending links to my sister who has read your story as well (stuburn sister, I dont think she has reviewed). Anyway my sister draws GREAT anime, as does my best friend sharifa (they sure know how to add emotion to a picture) However Im saying all of this to my dismay, My scanner is broke :'(

But I do have a reason for saying all this (of cource, im not that dumb), The thing is, if my scanner ever does get back to working (its been down for like a year O__O) I'll get one of them to draw me a picture to send (they owe me anyway).

Alright, this is tanya signing out. CHOW! ^__^

in truth, any story is for the audience, otherwise, why would any of us bother writing these stories out and attempt to publish them in some medium? but i'm curious, what kind of novel are you writing? sci-fi, fantasy, or something else? btw, does the quality of the fanart matter? i have an idea for a drawing, but i'm not the best artist...

aawwwwww...geee...thanx. you really should continue the story, the drama was okay with me but i guess you made a great decision. id have to admit, im a bit of a drama queen myself. (when i say "a bit of" a mean a lot of) update soon please!!!!!!!!!

great! i love humor! heh, hope you update in school but of course, do good in college!

personally, I'm enjoying the pace the story is going. there are a few times where i've wished for some development, but that's okay. every story can have chapters like that. i vote you keep it the way you started. it's the best way to keep it yours.

i would go for more humor purposes...i dunno thats just me, i don't thing the story is lagging at all! hey its your story, do what you want.