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by Ametank

schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Please keep up the great work!
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I'm glad Kurama and I made up! How dare that guy! Too bad for my hormones. I'm guessing someone's going to walk in on me and the jerk. I hope it's not Hiei, he'll kill him! Anyway, I loved it and pleases update as soon as you can!
person Neoki Jaganshi
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! you updated and i am stuck with a phycopath who is not hiei! noooooo............*kicks Rai in the nuts) update fast i hate resorting to such violent meods!
person star_kitty
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi! i'm back. I had to figure out where i left off from reading your story. *laughs nervously* i still love this story. I'm awaiting your next update. i don't mind if you keep this story going for a million years, i'll always read it!
person denise
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*glares at cliffie* You're evil...*hisssssssssssssssssssssssssss* update soon!
person animegirl007
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DID THAT !!!!!!!!! I KNOW THAT BETTER BE HIEI ...HE BETTER BE PISSED !!!!!!!!!!UPDATE
person AoA ^_~
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, I adore the new chapter! Loved every word of it, and am eagerly anticipating that cliffie ¬.¬ being cleared up... hahaha ^_^ Can't wait to read more!
person Tanya
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YA, I WAS ON THE THANK YOU'S ^__^

BUT YOU KNOW, IM ALSO REDBELLS ^__~ (TOLD YA I'V BEEN READING THIS SENCE THE BEGINING)

I TOTALY LOVED THAT! OMG! OMG! IM STILL SHOCKED AT THE OUTCOME! IM DIEING FOR MORE ^__^

HIEI WILL BE SO PISSEDDDDDDD. FIGHT. FIGHT. FIGHT!

LOL

THIS IS TANYA, HERE AND OUT. LOVE YA!
person Asilin
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*being held back by all her alter-egos* I'm going to castrate and kill Rai! Only Hiei touches me!!! *growls* evil cliffie...neway, glad you updated! i've got a pic started for fan-art, but i warn you, i'm not the best drawer in the world. but we'll see what happens. well, update asap!
person tryxi
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chpt. so does hiei have more feelings toward the reader then hes showing? and where was he during all this is happening im sure he wouldnt what rai to be doing that to the reader. and the fan art i would love to do some but i dont have a way to send it to u :( sorry ne ways update soon love the story.