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by Ametank

person nyoko
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! i loooooooovvvveeee it!!!!!!!!!!!!
person hiei_lonewolf
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"I had not expected Hiei to be questioning of the pups. But then there is a first for everyting I guess. Nice chapter, and do contnue. The picture is being made, just taking a while because of being quite busy. Do continue."

Hiei Lonewolf
person Dani
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay~! I kinda figured the lemon (which was so incredibly wonderful by the way) would be with Hiei, but authors/ess throw in twists sometimes. One question, what is that one word with the '*' behind it that Rai had said when he was talking about one body, two souls, one life, thing? Thanks~!!!
person Neoki
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hiei loves me! and i got to take kare of that idiotic person i am so happy! i am having my seven year old brother read your story! hahahaha thank you for updating cant wait to see more
person KuwaLove (somehow not logged in)
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHH! That was good! I loved it! Why won't Hiei just make me his mate and then we can be together forever! I wish I did kill Rai, but then again....I probably would hate myself after words. I hope he shows his true self to my brother, because then and only then will my brother not be friends with the perv. Anyway, I loved it and I can't wait! My puppies! Yeah! Mine and Hieis! Yeah! Sorry lost controll anyway, please continue.
person AoA
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm deliciously wonderful, I must say. I do so adore this story and your lemons *sighs contently* Can't wait for more ^_~
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapater!
person animegirl007
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're right ....I did think it was going to be Rai......It was a good lemon!!!! I can't wait to see the pups and what will Hiei do???will he finish the mating rutal or what ...more...more...more!!!!!!
person denise
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chappie...hehehe...i hope you update soon! ^^
person kyli the wolf hanyou
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update, and yes that wasnt kool, but hey i got hiei, yesss ^_^