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Sorry, I had to point it out, in the second paragraph from the bottom, you put "he ass" instead of "he ask, or asked or whatever". Just thought you'd like to know. Yes, it took you FOREVER! to get this out, but it was good. I have to inform you, sadly, however, that you can't keep us waiting like this. Some of us are DIEING!!!! ...or would that be DYING!!!! ...I dunno. Please update soon! But I can't help but think, would the loud music be bad for the pups? Just curious.

These are so childish. I fail to see the appeal.

Keep it going....you better not have me go into labor ...my first night out!!!!!!

Ah, darling, yet another lovely chapter ^_^ you may call it uneventful, but it was good nonetheless *cheers* i can't wait to read more!

hmmm this is very interesting, i wonder what hiei will have to say? OOOO what would happen if she met a friend she hasnt seen in a long time there? Will anything exciting happen? will whats his name, the male wolf demon her brother braught along with him be there... for the life of me i cant remember his name, it starts with an R doesnt it Ray? Raidon? something like that... maybe... oh well. I cant wait for the next chapter after waiting for what seemed an eternity for this one, ive been told atleast once by everyone i know and i mean EVERYONE, my parents, siblings, friends, aquintances you name it, ive been told im very VERY impatient but i will wait... try to wait... okay impatiantly wait while glaring at the computer waiting and screaming at everyone who tries to turn it off XD

woot! nice chapter! its been FOREVER! hehehe, hope next update is quicker! great job!

"I tried to send you the fanart picture, but it came back to me. Is your e-mail typed correctly, or do you have another I can try sending to?"

Hiei Lonewolf

hey girl, this thing is getting good. finally had a chance to read it before class. yea there were a few parts that i thought u could have added ure funny parts too. i mean come on ure stories are serious, but they have to have that special touch u have to make them funny too. this last chapter had many a funny line in them. things i could hear u saying in real life. can not wait for the next chapter. thank god u had that chapter after the cliffie otherwise i think i would have had to kill u. u know how much i hate cliff hangers. especially if the next part doesnt come soon after. hehehehehe cant wait for the next chapter. o the lemon, which was the chapter i just read turned out pretty good. i surely enjoyed the entire chapter with all the little phrases of ures tossed in there. im still laughin at a couple of them. :)

I love you story! AHH! The entire day i was like, grr...i want to go home and read! Please write more! Your also one of the only people i know to get Hiei's personality perfectly! I love it! AHH! Please write more!

X.X *takes deep breaths* Scared me for a minute there. Don't do that! -________- *doesn't particularly like Rai*......*at ALL* >.> Though it was kind of a surprise that Okami would be the one to save me. Thought it would've been Kurama or Hiei... Or all three. *shrug* ^-^ Anyhow, great, great, great chapter. *lovereded it* Update soon! o.o