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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really sweet. Hiei should know better than to bottle things up, especially from Kurama. Grrrrrrrrrreat job with this one too!
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If your aim was for loveing and sweet rather than hot, you hit your mark head on! Awsome story, can't really find anything rong with it.
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* i thought that was relle sweet. *crys for hiei* i feel so bad for him(but i LOVED the story so much!). i enjoyed it a lot! great job!
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is actually the first of your works I read and my favorite.
I always intended to leave a review but every time I read this I'm dazed, and I end up forgetting to.
This is very well-written and the images, sensation and the style it is written in is awesome.
I always intended to leave a review but every time I read this I'm dazed, and I end up forgetting to.
This is very well-written and the images, sensation and the style it is written in is awesome.
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hn, I like this fic. The kind intamacy that Hiei and Kurama share is quite refreshing. It's not too sappy, and not to sparce either. The grammar you have is also very nice, kudos to the good fix up job. All in all I was quite pleased with this, it was something strictly based on love with out the need to intertwine lust with it, that is a rare find. I hope you grace the fandom with more wonderful work.
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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is awsome. I really enjoy your writing style. I think the formatting issues are the site...I've noticed a lot of strangeness while reading fictions here...like incomplete words...partial words repeated, etc...anyways...The story was very beautiful. It seemed to be more....intimate...almost than the most descritive/erotic lemon scene I've read...it's a wonderful story.
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was sooooooo great. very well
written! i've never read a fic like that
one before, but i must say...BRAVO!
i was expecting hot steamy sex! lol
but what you wrote was better if i do
say so myself :) i absolutely loved it.
10/10
written! i've never read a fic like that
one before, but i must say...BRAVO!
i was expecting hot steamy sex! lol
but what you wrote was better if i do
say so myself :) i absolutely loved it.
10/10
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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great!
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November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really sweet! I adored it so much. I like how you were slightly able to keep Hiei in character while going through the entire thing. And it did portray a sweet, sensually concerned side of the relationship.
The few things that most of the other reviews have said: it's confusing for readers when the paragraphs are blocked together as well as the dialogue. Spaceing twice between the ends of sentences are also a good idea to keep everything neat and separete for the readers and in editing.
It really is a sweet story. I hope to see more like it from you! ^_^
The few things that most of the other reviews have said: it's confusing for readers when the paragraphs are blocked together as well as the dialogue. Spaceing twice between the ends of sentences are also a good idea to keep everything neat and separete for the readers and in editing.
It really is a sweet story. I hope to see more like it from you! ^_^
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November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry, you definitely did that concept justice. I would, however, suggest that, if you were to try this again, to give a little more background to it and a different setting than the usual Kurama's bedroom location.