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That was definately worth the wait! It was a great chapter and I really liked the therapy secction. I want to be a therapist when I get older. It would be so cool to read people the way that doctor did, and I think that the human mind is an interesting topic. I think Hiei's past that inspired me to want to learn more about the mind. Hiei is so cold and untrusting, but it's only because he had a very hard life. Hiei is my inspiration! You also forgot to put in that part about Hiei being questioned by Shiori about being a theif and everything, but I don't want you to change a thing. This chapter was perfect! Update Soon!
Sincerely Mea ^_^

I have no idea about therapy sessions either, though it seemed rather awkward and terrifying to me. I think I'd react similarly to Hiei if I was ever exposed like that to my whole family and especially it if was to my lover's whole family. :: shudders :: Thanks for elaborating on Kurama's healing bit that definitely had me scratching my head. It makes sense, though I'm not sure I buy it (lol). I completely understand about the dual inner-outter, softer-harder sides of Hiei and Kurama that you're trying to get across. I was actually thinking of writing their relationship like that in a fic a while ago, but got caught up in other things. I'm really glad that someone is doing such a wonderful job of it. I am hoping, however, that the solution to the rifts within the family will not be so black and white, but good luck with trying to write that without being over the top. Lol, then again, real life is usually stranger than fiction simply because you can't make some of that stuff up! :D Take this where you will, I'll keep in touch. ;) Fuzzy Eared out.

@_@ wow.....very deep and awsome!

I should be in bed, but I saw you updated and just had to had to read. Poor Hiei...It is a very unnerving thing to have someone read you so very accurately...I've known people who do that thing...they've done it to me...they're flat scary people...especially the ones who can tell when you're acting and then can tell you why, even if you're not sure yourself...Anyways.....since I'm having trouble seeing now...Great chapter...thank you for your hard work...look forward to the next one :D

Yay!!! You updated again!!! *gives you a golden star* ^^ Thank you so much for continuing this story.......I absolutely love it, and I can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter!!! (Oh, and just a side note: I know all about the infamous "tot he" -- you are not alone!!! lol) ^___~ Keep up the good work, and as always, update ASAP!!! Ja ne!!!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! THIS IS MY FIRST STORY I READ ON THIS SITE AND I'M ADDICTED TO IT AND NEED TO READ ANOTHER CHAPPIE!!! LOVE THE WORK SO FAR!! PLEASE KEEP IT UP!!! TASTEFULLY SMUTTY!! ^.^

I like it of course. :) Good to see an update. How come you update two chapters at a time? I just wanted to comment on how your dialgoue is so appropriate to each characters down to the word choices and grammar. It's something I keep struggling with in my fics - doing so without being over the top - so I expecially notice when it's done when. I was wondering about how fast Kurama can heal himself, shouldn't overnight have been long enough for at least the swelling in his face to have decreased and the minor cuts on his feet to have healed? I was wondering about Hiei in therapy from the moment the word was written. I look forward to it.

Great job, I can't wait for the next chapter, thearpy *giggles*

I can hardly wait to see what Hiei dose going to the shrinks. I love Hiei's coment "murder might help". I lol. Please continue to update and soon.

AH! AN UPDATE! You have saved me from the boredom that is my life. I especially loved the line : "The distinct murmur of ‘murder may have helped’ was heard coming from Hiei’s general direction, but no one commented on this.", hilarious to me for some reason. I'm glad everything is getting resolved, Kazuya rang of sweet victory for me >=D. WHOOHEHE. Looking forward to the next update.