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by mhmartini

person D.S.
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!...I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just finished reading all the chapters and I can't wait for the next update. Oh and about the therapy thing, for having almost no knoledge on it you did a pretty good job writing that part. There was only one mistake, most phychiatrists or counsellors can't tell that much about you in only that short of a time. Oh, and therapy sessions are really annoying. Unfourtunaly I have to go to them every 2 weeks and I hate it! Oh well, what can you do*srugs shoulders* Anyways, you are doing a great job so please continue!^_^

P.S. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Pls?:D
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay someone knows what exsanguination means!!
person hColleen
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter...I'm glad Shirori is showing a back bone....but, agh! Poor Hiei!!! I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm impressed by your medical terminology and, though I'm not entirely positive that all of that was correct, it sounded incredibly professional and added a lot more to the story than would have been by just a slap-bang job. /// I thought Hiei had died when my eyes glanced down to the middle of the paragraph with Kurama finds him recovering in the morning! Talk about having a near-death experience (lol)! /// It's great to be reading this fic again. Somehow I missed the update of the last chapter, hm. Oh well, I found it now. :)
person DarkRoseDamael
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woooooooooooooooooot! great fic! am so happy to see a h/k pairing all the hiei kurama fics died, or something have you noticed? i have! anyway do you think i can barrow this part of your fic? its just the perfect thing
“No bloodshed?” he asked. Hiei shook his head. “No one is tied up anywhere?” Hiei shook again. “No death threats?” No response.


plz ill copyright it to you! let me know.
person comicfancat
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow,what a chapter.After everything Hiei has been through in his life and now with
Kurama's family,to die protecting one of them would never be let down by his demon and human friends.(orange haired ones would have plenty to tease)So glad you didn't kill him off (thank you thank you)Can't wait for the update hope its soon
person Mea
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mea: That was a great chapter! I almost thought Hiei died, when actually he was getting better. And Hatanaka and Kurama made peace! Yay! They even hugged! :: Mea gets pushed out of the way by SLHAK:: SLHAK: How dare Hatanaka touch Kurama like that! He should die! BURN AND D- :: gets hit with another tanquilizer dart. SLHAK faint prisicely(spl?) after getting hit:: Mea thinking: Good thing I kept the gun close to the computer, and I put the faster acting stuff in it. Mea: Sorry about her. She really hates Hatanaka, and she doesn't forgive people to easily. 'I' really liked this chapter though. Also I wanted to say that I'm reading your other fic, Coming Clean, and I hope you update that one also. Update Soon!
Sincerely Mea ^_^
person KuwaLove
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent!!! I was at the edge of my seat!!! Poor Hiei....He has to survive...it's Hiei!!!! Please update soon!!! I'll die if you don't!!!
person thoth_moon
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. I hope Hiei's all right (well, I think I have a vague notion, considering a recent conversation we shared, hm?).

I think you should put "Coming Clean" on this website, even if it's not as "adult" as some stories.

Looking forward to the next chapter! ^__^
person MrVampire
schedule April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is the best. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I wonder how the shrink would reacted if Hiei and/or Karma told him they wore demons. Please update soon.