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person obsydia
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*breathes out sigh of relief* thank god hiei's ok... =) love this~~ update as quickly as you did for this chapter~ <3
person bells
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the story i just have one question why didn't kurama call yukina?
person shiori_foxies_mom
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has been an awsome story. I'm so glad you are going to finish it. Update soon.
person Mz.Bitz.
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omgosh I'm glad I came to check a second time today. When you said you had the next chapter almost done, I didn't know it would be this soon. But thenn again, I'm like a stalker that comes every other hour to see if peopel update. ^^;; HIEI IS GETTING BETTTTER YAYYY!!
person Mea
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mea:Yay! Another update. I really hope Hiei is alright! S.L.H.A.K.: He better be alright or I'm gonna- Mea: Sarah, what the hell do you think you are doing here! S.L.H.A.K.: I'm reviewing with you to save space! What was I saying before I was so rudely interupted!
:: looks at Mea, who is rummaging around in the closet:: S.L.H.A.K: Oh yay! You had better make him live or- :: Mea hits SLHAK over the head with a bat:: Mea: I'd better finish this before she wakes up. Mea thinking: Sometimes that little monkey makes me wanna..She thinks she's so cool making threats and giving flames..:: SLHAK starts waking up:: Mea: Great chapter, Update Soon!
Sincerely Mea ^_^
:: SLHAK pushes Mea off the chair. Mea dives back into the closet:: SLHAK's PS- Hiei had better live or- :: SLHAK gets hit with tranquilizer dart:: Ah crap, not again! :: faintsx_x:: Mea thinking: When will she ever learn. I should have used the gun from the start! Mea's PS- Sorry about her ::whispers:: she hasn't taken her meds today. Again, Update Soon!
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHH! HIEI! YOU BRAVE LITTLE BASTARD! WHY DID YOU DO THAT! NOOO! NOOO!!!! NOOOOO DONT DIEE!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
person obsyida
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yesyesyesyesssssss! i've been waiting for an action scene like this since 'the family' found out they weren't human! XD!!! LOVE it~~ <3<3<3 update soon~~
person hColleen
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank all the gods that you updated so quickly! This chapter is much a relief after the last one...Poor Hiei...I'm sharing this story with a friend who can't come to this site and she screamed at me for the way the last chapter ended....I think she will be a little appeased by this one...again, thank you for updating so quickly.
person comicfancat
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no what did you do to poor Hiei! After everything he has been through with Kurama's
family you bleed him as well .I had no idea this was a sequel to something else but would love to check out the first story.! You didn't say where it was posted (if it is that is)
can't wait for the update hope its soon
person thoth_moon
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Hiei's okay! I wasn't too worried though, killing him would be more my thing than yours, yes? ^__^ I wonder if this whole occurence will prove to hasten Hatanaka's change in attitude toward the two, what with Hiei being seriously injured defending the little Suichi.

Well anyways, I look forward to the next update (as always), and I hope that Hiei's awake in the next chapter.