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by mhmartini

person What2callmyself
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya!! Only one more to go? It's bittersweet ne? Fulfilling yet saddening at the same time. I must say it was a good story, and also is Coming Clean. Will there be a third story with this type of theme? Anyways, I hope to hear from you soon! Here's to the next chapter!! ^_^!!
person Suryallee
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I normaly not read M/M stories that much but this one caught me!
Please update it soon!
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yippy! Awsome! Hurray! An update at last. I love this fic. Great chapter. Update soon.
person hato chiisai
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eep!! Only one more chapter?! NUUUUUU!!!!! This has got to be the best YYH fic I've ever read!!! (I'm very picky) I just love this fic, and am really dreading the last chapter because that means there will BE NO MORE!!! WAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!
person D.S.
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I still can't believe that there's only one more chapter. Well great job, I love your story!!!!! In one of the reviews that you answered, you said you have written a death scene. Well I'd just like to know...WHO DIES?!?!?!?!(and which fic will it appear in?) OK now that's out of the way, please update soon, even though It's gonna be the last chapter, I still want to know what happens. See ya!
person hColleen
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Hiei's getting better...I'm sad there's only one more chapter though...I really like your writing style, it's very enjoyable.

You can find some information on Hatakana over at rosewhip.net, but there's not really much to know (this is what is there: "Shiori Minamino's second husband. Even Kurama agrees Hatanaka is a good man, and approves of their marriage. Hatanaka has a son named Shuuichi, who becomes Kurama's stepbrother." and on Shuuichi-kun "Shuuichi is Kurama's younger brother-in-law. He is the son of Hatanaka, Shiori's new husband. Shuuichi is a friendly kid, and likes his new brother a lot. He calls him "Shuu-ani!" which is freakin' cute. Shuuichi Hatanaka gets possessed by Kara during the Makai Saga, but comes to no harm in the end.")

Anyways...I had something else to say, but lack of sleep is catching up with my mental functioning....I really enjoyed this chapter...it's good to see that Hatakana is coming around, even if it did take a tragedy to bring it about...several, actually...see ya next time.
person comicfancat
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To cool!another update.I think you did well with how Hiei is recovering,and I don't think Hatanaka would let them teach his son any fighting stuff.I was checking out you homepage and loved the ove scenes that were not posted on FF.Although I hope they will be posted here on AFF,nice going on the chapters there as well as here.Update soon
person Everqueen
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great birthday present, an update on Bugs. YAY. I'm so glad Hiei is awake. i did find it rather unusual that Hiei stayed awake that long after waking, but since he is a demon, it's still believable. Thanks for a great chappie.
person thoth_moon
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sensing a major step forward in the peace movement between our demons and Hatanaka.

Ooh... the story's nearly over. But... that means that *perhaps* you might start on that other installment, maybe? That should prove interesting... ^__^
person Mea
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! I don't really have that much to say about the story, except that it was great, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Update Soon!
Sincerely Mea ^_^
PS- I can't wait for Akambo! ~_^