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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This isn't to bad, in fact it's a whole lot better then when i do my Kurama and Hiei lemons. Please keep up the good work.
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While I've always liked some of the romantic tones of your fics, this one is more humanly realistic, but a little unbelievable to me (as a huge oxymoron)...
In purly my opinion: The family thyrapy was a tad off; you know Hiei is openly sarcastic when people bring up his past, but even though he's now in a peaceful, family setting, I don't think he would really openly subjugate his past to Shuuichi and Shiori. Was there supposed to be another installment of the thyrapy? There were a lot of things going on in this story, and the last chapter sort of just... ended, rather abruptly, giving me a feeling that you wanted to finally get it done to continue other projects.
I sound like I'm flamming sarcastically, but I'm really not! I do like your romance with Kurama and Hiei, and sometimes I keep coming back to look at your lemon fics, it's just this one left me... I don't know. I don't want to insult/upset you with any bad comments.
~mk
In purly my opinion: The family thyrapy was a tad off; you know Hiei is openly sarcastic when people bring up his past, but even though he's now in a peaceful, family setting, I don't think he would really openly subjugate his past to Shuuichi and Shiori. Was there supposed to be another installment of the thyrapy? There were a lot of things going on in this story, and the last chapter sort of just... ended, rather abruptly, giving me a feeling that you wanted to finally get it done to continue other projects.
I sound like I'm flamming sarcastically, but I'm really not! I do like your romance with Kurama and Hiei, and sometimes I keep coming back to look at your lemon fics, it's just this one left me... I don't know. I don't want to insult/upset you with any bad comments.
~mk
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was sooooooooo funny i criied please write more it seemed so funny
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That has to be the absolute best fic that i have ever read!!!!!!!!!
Yes,I'm a little hyper,pay no heed.I was in tears during the entire thing.I cried because Kurama and Hiei were so cute,I cried because Kurama got slapped,i cried because this is the greatest story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have been wanting to review for a long time,and I finall did!!!!!
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!
Signed,
Miss Terious
That has to be the absolute best fic that i have ever read!!!!!!!!!
Yes,I'm a little hyper,pay no heed.I was in tears during the entire thing.I cried because Kurama and Hiei were so cute,I cried because Kurama got slapped,i cried because this is the greatest story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have been wanting to review for a long time,and I finall did!!!!!
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!
Signed,
Miss Terious
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, I don't want it to be over. Well at least you promised a sequil. Hey don't forget to update Coming Clean too. You left it in an aweful place. Update and post soon.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absolutely fantastic ending can't wait for the third part...well actually I can. keep it up
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Great ending chapter! I'm sad that it's over but happy that there will be another sequel(plus there's still "Coming Clean" also ^-^) You did a very good job with spelling and grammar throughout the story. Just a few minor mistakes in more earlier chapters. Revising would be good if you have the time, but only if you have the time, don't drive yourself insane. Well good luck with future stories and I'll check those out too! See ya!
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* It's done...that's sad, in a way, since thie is such a wonderful story....but as you told me, all good things must end (I really appreciated that, too, because that story was starting to stress me) I look forward to your next story, as well :D
I think it's cute that Hiei played with Kurama by making him chase him all over the house just because the fox was being worried/overprotective...and good that Hatakana was making efforts and progress toward accepting the two...his gifts were wonderfully thoughtful. My opinion on the lemons...if they fit into the plot line, fine, wonderful, put them in (given that the story is plotted), but if not, leave them out. I think that leaving things to the imagination at the end of this was more effective than a lemon would have been....it fits more with your style that way.
I think it's cute that Hiei played with Kurama by making him chase him all over the house just because the fox was being worried/overprotective...and good that Hatakana was making efforts and progress toward accepting the two...his gifts were wonderfully thoughtful. My opinion on the lemons...if they fit into the plot line, fine, wonderful, put them in (given that the story is plotted), but if not, leave them out. I think that leaving things to the imagination at the end of this was more effective than a lemon would have been....it fits more with your style that way.
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So they're finally leaving huh?
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great end to a great story. This story will remain a favorite of mine for the rest of my life. Thank you for writing it. It was great. I'm looking forward to the reading Akambo and the rest of Coming Clean. I'll keep reading to the end.
Sincerely Mea ^_^
PS- You're a great writer.
Sincerely Mea ^_^
PS- You're a great writer.