rate_review Reviews

I think that the therapist will be the one needing therapy, when this is over. Imagine it: "Hi, my name is Kurama, and I'm a demon. My lover here is Hiei and he's also a demon. My father is having trouble with that." It wouldn't be easy, to do therapy on that. Love the story!

Fuzzy Eared (ff.net) recommended this to me after I read Unbalanced Pendulum. She was right. This is great stuff. And done very tastefully. for your first (postable) lemon, that was really good. Damn, if Mom knew I read this stuff I wouldn't even SEE the computer for at least a month. But it's great stuff. I'll glad this was recommended. ^.^

Hiei on sugar? you better show us what happens when Hiei is on sugar. If you don't I'll write about in myself. And I don't care if that chapter was 'pointless', it was great. Like a one-shot in the middle of a story, actually. well, this definatly lives up to expectations. (I expect more from stuff that's recommended to me than stuff I find. XD) Can't wait to keep reading.

"Kurama staunch refusal to do so touched the small demon." should be "Kurama's staunch refusal to do so touched the small demon." Grammar isn't all that important, though. It's a great story. You aren't the only one that creates your own timeline. I do that too, and sometimes I remove events from the real thing. XD Mostly because I'm way behind everyone else and didn't know they happened. This is definately one of the better fanfics I've read. I'll have to read some of your other stuff, soon.

You have the whole thing planned out in chapter 5? I'm on chapter 8 of my story, and I only just got the story line figured out! This is great! Love it.

I'm so glad to have finally found the end of this story - I've been absent from the Yu Yu section of AFF.net for a while. The ending was very sweet. I'm impressed that you didn't fall into the trap of ending with another long sex scene. It was simple and sweet without any "contamination." I feel that this ending got the point across and was much more final and original than the alternative would have been. I can't believe how prolific of a writer you are, that's a feat in and of itself. Thank you for writing this fanfic and this whole saga. From the fuzzy one.

i really enjoyed this fanfiction. normaly i dont take the time to read them, but this one was awsome. i mean it. thank for the good reading material. see ya, and hope you make more, if you do, plz keep me up to date if you want and have the time. bye.

WOOT!!! Your one of the best writers on here! Very moving story, and can't weight to read the last installment, (or the rest of comeing clean for that matter...) And I love the dig at DBZ you added in, someone finally aggrese with me on that. And please eventually write the death sene and the fammily runone(sp?) Lots of opurtuntiy for funnieness there! (the rununon, not the death sene!)

This was amazing! It was so sweet...not that sickly-nauseating-over-the-top sort of fluffiness that some of the fics out there have, but a genuine sweetness! thank you for being such a wonderful writer!

i actually saw this on Thoth_Moth's profile, and checked it out....nice, nice! that was great. im thyinkin' of reading coming clean...so look out for my review! im a major angst, drama, and fluff and HieiXKurama fan, so yea, give me time, and i'll check it out...great story...*applauds*