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Squee! You just totally rocked my YYH pet peeve!

I hate the term 'Sweet snow' and such. THANK YOU.

I <3 the rest of your story, BTW. ^^;;

~CassieR

I love your story. Please keep more coming! That "Sweet Snow" bit at the end was priceless!

arghhhhh... another one I've caught up to =/
Please tell me you're going to continue this?? It is just tooooo cute of a story to let the thing die right here!!!
The romp through the house while Shiori was watching was absolutely precious. The firebaby actually playing with the kitsune with someone around ... adorable!!! And I'd really like to see if you have them and Hatanaka getting along a lot better at the end of the "invasion of the ningens" ^_~ At this stage, seems like Hiei is ready to let Shiori be a member of the household anytime. Guess we'll have to wait and see ... but ... not toooooo long kk? Onegai?
Oh, and if you can ... please let me know when you do update?? ^_^

Loved it. Lol, I've never really thought about produce that way before.

That scene was so endearing - you must continue. I cannot wait to see how this develops.

its great n all but u have to do me one thing n thats..........get the next chapter up very soon

it was good next chappie

tooo cool,can't wait to see what happens next (blush) poom wam walking in on some great sex.hehe

Oh wow, the ending was sorta funny with Shiori's reaction. Continue this soon, alright? ^^ It's a good one! Well-written too!

I loved it. Don't ever leave the produce isle again. Hurry up and write the follow-up cause I can't wait to see how Kurama "smoothes things over" with his mom.