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I thought I was the only one! (The supermarket thing) Couldn't get a chance to read sooner due to school and stuff. Nice so far, if you know what I mean.

Pheonix,
Why does Santa say, "Ho, ho, ho," all the time? And who is he directing it to? And why do we let little kids (and some adults) believe in him?

SOOOOOOOOOO EVIL! don tear hiei n kurama apart n mayb (mind u it jus an idea) u could have shuu-kun find out n b on hiei n kurama's side n b aganst his father on there relastionship

This is going great so far and can't wait for you to update(hope soon) Poor Hiei and Kurama when will his mom make his narrow
minded stepfather understand or maybe his stepbrother will surprise them all mmm

THAT HORRIBLE STEPFATHER! I CANT BELIEVE HE WOULD REQUEST KURAMA TO TAKE THE RING OFF!!! HE HAS SOME NERVE! GRR I'm getting so worked up over fiction lols. great chapter update soon.

This story is so funny, and sexy! Hiei lying around naked cracked me up, and Kurama's stepfather and brother are such pains in the ass, bitch slap them!

lol poor hiei n kurama everyone's walkin in on em n poor hiei-san ;.; he kept falling on the floor ;.;

nope,don't be sorry it was a good chapter and I can't wait for you to update again soon.

Yay!!! You updated!!! And you haven't lost your touch at all: I loved it!!! Very clever and humorous... I have a brother around that age, so I could totally relate!!! (Thank God for door locks......... ^^;;) Keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!!

LOLS. All those thuds. oh boy. even though, like you said, it was a bit random, it was a good chapter. HAHA. update soon=]

Hmm...no offense intended because I appreciated the update but that chapter (incomparison to the first two) was pretty bad. The first two chapters really evoked feeling and were quite well done, while this one is comparable to a parody written on not enough sleep. But I loved the first two chapters and so will definitely continue to read this fic because of its potential. I'll give it another chance ::wink:: Oh and one thing - about the rant about crazy movies - Karasu's hair changes color when he powers up - I didn't know if you knew or were bashing DBZ.