rate_review Reviews

Wow...this is really incredible. I'm not sure what else to say, other than that. You said this was your first lemon....I like your style. Keep up the wonderful work. Personally, I don't think the refrigerator thing was over done...I've had...ummm....days that felt like that...days where no matter what you do/say...nothing is right...everything starts an argument...even stupid things. Poor Kurama...I feel so badly for him...he tries so hard to be everything to his family and his stepfather keeps demanding more and more...I look forward to seeing what you do.

AHHHHHHHHHHHH MY POOR KURAMA!!!!! YAY AN UPDATE hurry w/ more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

I didn't even KNOW about the last couple of chapters!!

Oh ... poor Kurama! Trying to keep everything on an even keal and nothing wanting to cooperate! And Hatanaka ... ooof is he ever being an ass! Well, at least Shu-kun figured it all out on his own (even if daddy DIDN'T believe it at first) and the whole family can know the truth. Isn't it so much fun when parents think their kids are stupid to what's going on around them.

Favorite parts in the last couple of chapters have got to be Hiei telling the sales girl that one, my house today! and Hatanaka himself saying that the boys were demons. Not to mention the little speech of Hiei's about Kurama facing OMG demons without flinching and not being able to handle one week with his own family! Maybe Shiori will step in now and make Hatanaka mind his own business when it comes to our favorite firebaby and kitsune ... maybe ... we'll see.

Love the story and I'll be back to check on it here and at the website ^___^

I love your story. It's very well written, the characters all have a reason behind they're actions which makes the plot move smoothly. That's a charateristic missing from many fanfics but not this one. I love the shift from comedy to angst, it worked very well. Oh and of course I loved the Kurama/Hiei sex scenes as well ^_~

Grrr.. Im starting to get really pissed at Hatanaka. REALLY REALLY PISSED. You write wonderfully well and I love reading this fanfic ^^. So keep it up. *stabs Hatanaka* ARGG DIE~!

Yay!!! You updated!!! A lot!!! ^___^ OMG, I just love this fic sooooo much!!! Very kewl idea!!! It has a perfect mix of comedy, sensuality (or just plain sex...that's good, too... ^___~ ), and angst...and it's well written!!! I can't wait to find out what happens next!!! Keep up the good work, and update ASAP, kk? Thanks!!!!!

Oh man, I'm utterly addicted to this story! I can absolutely not wait to see what happens next. There were a few typos and such, but nothing too distracting in the last couple of chapters. Everything (except for chapter 3, but we won't talk about that one) has been so realistic and believably, nothing too over the top for a week or mortal Hell. It makes the demons' situation all the more frustrating for the readers (i.e. me, lol). I won't pose a guess as to how this will go, I'd rather just wait and see. So please update.

must u take so long to update when it gets sooooooo good?

I have been following this story for a while and I absolutely LOVE IT! Poor Kurama. Damn his father Kurama should have hit him anyway! Regardless though awesome fic! PLEASE update again soonnnnn!

I want you to kill Hatanaka off as soon as you get the chance. If I was Kurama, I swear I would have chopped off his head by now, he doesn't deserve to be treated like that, no one does. Please put up the next chapter soon, I REALLY enjoy reading this fic.