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Hehehe that rhymed. OH MY GOD THAT SORRY PIECE OF SHIT! KILL HIM KILL HIM HIEI! GODDAMN IT WHY DIDN'T YOU KILL HIM.

Hiei: Kurama didn't want me to...
Kurama: ::nods::

THAT SORRY BASTARD HOW DARE HE PUT KURAMA THROUGH THAT SHIT! Kurama YOU should have killed him. Close minded ass! ::Breathes remembers to breathe...:: All right so this fic is beyond awesome!!! You have to update again SOON! I want to know what happens!!!!!!

i really like your stories but the way you write Kurama's step father really makes me hate him. i am also reading your other story 'coming clean' and that one and this one are great stories. i am glad that you'er are fixing grammar mistakes though because it kind of made it hard to read. hope you keep updating.

Great chapter and about time his mum said something to them about all of it.Although I still think she should say something to hubby in private about his behavior to her son.Plus its also about time his brother showed he isn't as closed minded

So the story has finally reached its climax. The 2nd bug problem was, given, an author's direct intervention but, Hell, so are most of the twists in story plots. I love the way everything just fell apart with one strike and how Hiei has basically said "Fuck you" to Hatanaka. It's nice to see the softer side of Hiei (I've seen enough terrible OC sap to last me a demon's lifetime). I can't see Hatanaka taking this easily, adjusting will take a long while.

You already know how addicted I am to this story so what more do I need to say? Oh, P.S. There were a few typos in the last two chapters (6 and 7), but nothing major.

Wow what a way to find out about your family mmm,I can't wait to find out about the family talk and what will be said when Kurama wakes up.Hope Mom puts her foot down with hubby .Plus I'm glad to see Kurama's stepbrother finds it cool about the whole thing.
Update soon pleaseeee.

I love this story. It's about time that they decided to try and work things out. Too bad poor Kurama collapsed. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Why oh why do you torment by leaving off their!!! lol I LOVE your stories, and this one just kicks ass lol =^.^=

Bad Hatanaka! Stressing out poor Kurama like that! But hey, now everything's more or less out in the open, so maybe things will get better, huh? Update soon, I must find out!

AJDHSJFHS! I CANT BELIEVE HE HIT HIM! AGHFJ! Words can't express my anger and I have resosrted to just letters. WHOO... Rub it in his face Hiei! TELL THAT BASTARD THAT KURAMA DIDNT GET ENOUGH SLEEP BECAUSE OF HIM!!! GO ! GO ! GO!. WOw. This fic has me really riled up. HAHA. You can ignore any insane comments I might have made. Please update soon =]

It's okay that it's not full blown comdey.
It's the diversity that is making this story great.
However, I'm sad. It seems like this chapter is
eding to a wrap up with Shuu-kun finally learning
about the situtaion. Anyway, I hope you keep writing.