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by mhmartini

person hColleen
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Maybe a "set-up" chapter, but I think it says a lot about where the family is. Hatakana almost redeemed himself by making the appointment by himself, but it would have been better had he done it *before* things got out of control (but, then would that have helped the plot line?) Oh, dear...Hiei in thereapy? I worked behavioral health...I know that's not gonna be pretty....behavioral health people ask the *stupidest* questions to get reactions out of people...we're scarry people :D Ta :D
person LadyAqualyne (Too Lazy to Sign in)
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HELLOOOO AND YAYYYY A new chapter!!!!! This one was really good! I can't wait to see the next one I am sure it is going to ROCK!
person Mea
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! Oops! I can't think of anything to say. Oh well, Update Soon!
Sincerely Mea ^_^
PS- I can't wait for you to update 'Coming Clean', it's such a good story! ^_^
person maya
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wha would be 'bad' for hiei to say to the person? n y did it take so long to update ;.; anywho plz hurry?
person hatochiisai
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO!!!!! Oh my gosh!! I love YuYuHakusho, and LOVE the Hiei/Kurama pairing, but it is so rare to find a fic I actually LIKE!!! And this one has become my FAVORITE!!!! I can't wait to see Hiei in therapy!!!!! Keep writing!!!
person Kanan
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Please continue updating!
person thoth_moon
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe...Hiei in therapy. Tell me, will we need strait jackets? It should be interesting when Shiori asks Hiei about his "criminal past". Hm, will she discover the identity of Hiei's living accomplice? That could prove VERY interesting ^_^
person comicfancat
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story and I'm hooked till the end.Hiei and Kurama coming clean about everything to everyone might be alittle
much except maybe Kurama's mom that is.And the first meeting isn't a one on one with the persons family at least not a major one
anyway so really Hiei shouldn't be having any major headaches about this.Can't wait for the next update,hope its soon
person obsydia
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story~ i think its wonderful how you created the family interaction and the different reactions of the family members when faced with living with hiei and kurama. ^^~ will yusuke and kuwabara ever show up? i can't wait to find out what happens! update! XD
person Saka
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Updates!! I'm sorry I didn't get to read these wonderfully written chapters before but my life has been non-stop -.-U
Anyways great fic!! Update soon I can't wait for more of this fic.
*puts her shovel away* I guess I won't kill Hankata yet, though he's close to bein dead. >.> Hit Kurama and dieeeeeeee!
Update soon