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October 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have to tell you that of all of the thousands of stories I have read across the site and internet, this one pulls me back and I find myself reading and rereading it again. I am in love with the plot and that the characters are realistic. Absolutely amazing story that I have read maybe 10 times already.
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March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My.
Wonderful! I can't wait to finish the third one!
Wonderful! I can't wait to finish the third one!
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute, well-written and creative! Though the transition from over 30 chapters of torture and death in Coming Clean to the comparatively mellow events of this fic was... interesting. Actually, it was kind of refreshing. All in all, very good job on both stories. I'll start reading the next tomorrow. ^_^
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Review for chapters 3 and 4. I feel so bad for Kurama and Hiei. Hiei having to do the *thud* thing so many times on the floor. And I'm going to have to remember that line of his LOL. I also think you've got alot of people's attitudes about same sex pairings correct. Sad isn't it, when people can't be free to live their own lives, especially in their own homes. Once again, all I can say is good job with this story.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL, well, once I got started I just had to finish reading, it's that good of a story. I was very sad when Hiei got hurt, but I am so glad that you decided to let him live. And I'm glad they managed to come together as a family. *waves and goes off merrily to look for more of your stories*
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I just found this story and decided to read it. I've made it through chapter two so far and I must say I am very impressed both with your quality of writing and your plot line. Very tastefully done so far, my compliments to you. I will review further as I read more chapters, just wish I had found it while you were writing it.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god that is so dan sweet!!! Hieie is so nice to Kurama!!!! Imagine if we got to see that sence on TV!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (the fifteenth chappie mind you)
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heres another review and I LOVE IT!! ^________________^
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHAHAHAHA!! I really like this story! I especially appreciate the crack about DBZ. Classic! It was so funny how everyone kept walking in on them. Hiei is funny. "that's it. I'm not getting up."..."Ever. I don't care what happens or who sees me like this, I'm not getting up."
I like that line. ^^ It made me smile!
I like that line. ^^ It made me smile!
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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE Coming Clean and Bugs!!!!! When are you going to post Akambo?