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August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well you've got my attention! Who knew Yuusuke had such a dirty mouth?
I'm interested in seeing where this is going and looking foward to the next chapter, although if Kurama ends up with Yomi in the end I'll scream :P
I'm interested in seeing where this is going and looking foward to the next chapter, although if Kurama ends up with Yomi in the end I'll scream :P
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August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can't say I like the Y/Ko pairing, but the story looks good. That is, the part I read. Maybe you tried to write properly and AFF messed it up(it's been doing that), or maybe you didn't realize the importance, but you need to double-space between paragraphs or readers' eyes will go crossed. And, if it's long, we'll quit halfway. (Like I did.)
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August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh wow that is good. I'm really interested in this. ^^ Can't wait to read more of it.