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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it, love it, LOVE IT!!! (>_<) Kurama's drunk... HUZZAH!!!
Yes, it is a bit short, but at least the story makes sense. It doesn't suck either. (^_~)
Love, Ko-krama
Yes, it is a bit short, but at least the story makes sense. It doesn't suck either. (^_~)
Love, Ko-krama
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, the rest of my review got cutt off... I hate that... (U_U)
Like I was about to say... this story is a tad short but it doesn't suck, I really love it. Kurama being drunk rubs me the right way for some reason. (^_^) And I like Hiei x Kurama pairings anyway.
Love, Ko-krama
Like I was about to say... this story is a tad short but it doesn't suck, I really love it. Kurama being drunk rubs me the right way for some reason. (^_^) And I like Hiei x Kurama pairings anyway.
Love, Ko-krama
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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked what I read but it was too short to form a real good opinion. My biggest tip, then, is make the next chappie longer. My other tip is don't have them get in bed just 'cause Kurama's drunk. They call it 'Dutch Courage', but 'Dutch Dodge' might be a more fitting name. Instead, maybe you should rope Hiei into playing nursemaid for his tipsy friend, and things could go from there. At least it would be an uncommon development.