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January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought I reviewed this before...sorry...anyways...as I said...virgin kitsune...funny idea. I like how you portray their uncertainty at first and then their love....It seems plausable...well, except the virgin kitsune bit....lol.....very very sweet :D I'm enjoying it
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,you did the lemon very good.You should write another one.I'll be here to support you and all your crazy ideas.Ja ne
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHHHHHHHHH MYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD HOTNESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!! :Gets and icepack and puts it on her head and fans herself:: I will not faint I will not faint I will not faint.......... You have GOT to write more soon PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! I LOVE this fic Love it Love it LOOOOOOOOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ITTTTTTTTT!!!!
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January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, you didn't mess it up at all. I think that you did much, but in a positive way. No way was that messed up! I have read plenty of KuramaxHiei lemons, but none like this really. I crown you with the award of making Kurama a vigrin firstly, and a second award for an excellent first try at creating lemons. I know how it is making your very first! It's like Yoko finally losing it! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Dont mind me at the moment, being evil as I usually am! *blinks* ^.^;
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you were the first person to ever have Kurama as a virgin.(0_o) I really wasn't expecting that. The sex chapter was okay. Remember that story 'The Meikai War' you read recently. I know the site adress, so you can read more stories written by that author, just for fun. //b-chan1.tripod.com/market.htm is the adress. I just thought maybe you could read the fics, and if you like them tell a friend about them. I think they are great stories that should be shared with the world. So if it isn't to much trouble you could go to the site. I knew you read the story because I read the review page, to see if other people like the stories, and I saw your name. So thank you for your time, and Update Soon!
Sincerely Mea ^_^
Sincerely Mea ^_^
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, Yoko as a virgin. I'm telling you, I've NEVER found a fic with that twist before. Like the origianlity. Anyways, this is seriously your first lemon? It's really good. So what'll happen next? Update soon, please!
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great begining,and not a bad lemon for a first time either.Can't wait to see what the next chapter is going to be
about,(the morning after maybe) :) Maybe go onto the fact that Kurama (was) a virgin in the next chapter and more practice
needed mmmm
about,(the morning after maybe) :) Maybe go onto the fact that Kurama (was) a virgin in the next chapter and more practice
needed mmmm
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOAH NELLY WHAT A TWIST! I was so not expecting that one. Damn good story though I enjoy it, and I hope to see an update soon... ::Puppy eyes:: Pretty please?
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January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O0o0o0olalas things are getting steamy. do update soon =]
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found this chapter 6 the best out of them all, you're a very talented wrtier and u describe things vididly and wonderfully. Please continue with the story, u're doing a great job!
~Kye~
~Kye~