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for Could it be fate?

by sutraqueen101

person KogasHentaiLuver
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice Chapter. I like the lemons, very hot. I wonder what's going to happen with Hiei? And what will happen when Yusuke finds out that Kurama had been involved with Hiei? I think the best Kurama line had to be "Fuck school for today" That was priceless. Can't wait for the next chapter. Nice work.
person kit-kit
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow kurama and yusuke are a bunch of sex addicts but thats alright cause they love each other. great chapter i can't wait for the next one.
person Altar of Wishes
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AoW: *worships the author* Hi! I have been reading this for awhile and I finally dediced to review... you're doing a great job with the lemons!

Kuwa: *coughs* And the character development.

AoW: *stuffs him in a closet* Anyway I'm looking forward to another chapter!
person Kyoden
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still great! Another nice lemon chapter! Please continue.....I NEED more.
person Vinny12142k
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Vincent: Wow... Just WOW.... THIS STORY IS SOMETHING! I'm a new comer to this site, and ur story was my first read. And I must say that it is really SOMET. PL. PLZ UPDATE! UPDATE! WOW... "Ill never watch YU-YU... the same again."
person Hiei's wolfgirl
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ya know, I feel sorry for Hiei. I mean I do like a Kurama/Yusuke fic, but I just can't but hope Hiei will find someone who is a lot better then Kurama. And you bettet mat make Hiei do something to hurt Kurama and Yusuke!!!!!!! I don't want Hiei to hurt any more!!!! Just make Hiei really cold trowards Kurama and Yusuke!!!!
person kit-kit
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update soon i really like this story.
person comicfancat
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yea is right! I like the story and can't wait for you to update to the next chapter.Although the pairing is useally Heie and Kurama,and I like that pairing myself You have done well so far with them and should continueh yoh your first plan of the story.
person evilchild(not signed in)
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have to finish this! I want to find out what happens next!!!!! What a great place to leave a cliff-hanger but I guess I understand. School can be very demanding some times! Hope you put up the next part soon!
person kit-kit
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story please update soon.