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for Could it be fate?

by sutraqueen101

person Anon
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good work cant wait to see how it all pans out
person Rogue Sage
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
all I have to say is WOW. I cant wait to see what you wright next, you have me chomping at the bit for more. Thank you for sharing your story
person kit-kit
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh hell yeah i see the drama coming i can't wait to see how the nights going to go. i wonder if kurama will tell yusuke what happen and about the keiko thing im with you on it i don't really like keiko all that much.
person KogasHentaiLuver
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG This is sooooo great. I'm sooooo happy that Hiei wasn't a total asshole, that it was Karasu. I like that senerio better. I also like Yusuke trying to console himself with Evan and NOT Keiko. Even though my fic had a nice and understanding Keiko in it, I still don't like her, hehehe. I'm anxious for what Yusuke's reaction will be once he finds out what really happened. That is, if he will ever listen to Kurama. You are a wonderful writer. Please, please give us the next chapter soon. Well, I better go work on my chapter 3. It's all going to be one big lemon.
person Kyoden
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still a great story, but my question is...wat does Karasu hav nething to do with this? lol Maybe Im jus a lil slow. Its very possible. But if u could clear that up that wuld b great. But plez continue I still luv this story!
person kenshinjunkie03
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what the hell do you think you're doing leaving me like that. who cares if it's a soap opera, it kicks major ass. pleas, please, PLEASE update soon. oh yeah, happy new year!
person Altar of Wishes
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kurama! I really hope that things can be sorted out because that just makes me sad (oh yes I cried as sad as that seems). I wonder where Yusuke is... he's not exactly helping things by running away. He should talk with Kurama and figure things out.

P.S. Thanks about Keiko, because she's strong FC and it seems like any FC who can stand on their own gets the shaft.
person Vinny12142
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LIKE O MY GOD!!! That "Hiei" is a LOSER and RAPE'IST! It's one thing to be a RAPE'IST, but he torn Kuruma ass hole... Oh, thats just plain EVIL! Hey keep it up and UPDATE SOON!!! Hmm and can you make my man Yusuke a little bit more man-lee-er b/c he's looking like a real girl-lee man waliking away from Kurama and "Hiei" scene...
person Shinna
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this story. Keep up the good work. update soon
person shameika
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to reading the next chapters. Please write more soon