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for Could it be fate?

by sutraqueen101

person kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in)
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm happy. hiei always gets to be pregnant but now it's k-man's turn^_^V (V for vitory)
person kit-kit
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
reward..pause..play kurama or is it yusuke that pregnant most likely kurama though i do kind of wish yusuke was pregnant i think it would be so funny especially with the mood swings already mixing with yusuke natural short temper. anyway good chapter with a surprising ending
person KogasHentaiLuver
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good. Kurama prego *that's priceless* I'm glad Yusuke finally knows what actually happened. I hope Kurama will give him a second chance. It seems to me that the plot is thickening. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person vampiregamehehehaha
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg no u did not!!! you telling me that the great yuoko got freaking hit by a freaking car. are u serious. omg soap opera+ jerry springer hehehhehe. I like the story so far but u need to work on the fight scenes like really one flash of teh rose whip and is over. All in all, great romantic/comedy/drama/magic/etc.
person Benny1234
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LIKE O MY GOD! This story is... is... GREAT! Hey I havn't read a good Yusuke & Kurma story in a minute. Hey ALL PRAISE THE AUTHOR! And Kurma should have KILLED that jeck Evan, because I know I woud have! Hey Yukuse is TOO HOT 4 sum nobody waiter to handle. PLZ UPDATE SOON, LUV THE STORY & Hope that sexy redheaded god, Kurma is OK :( .
person aphinna
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate not seeing Kurama & Yusuke happy. update soon
person shameika
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm anxious to read the next chapter. update soon please
person Shinna
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Kurama will be okay. Maybe this incident will make Yusuke realize just how much he needs Kurama. update soon
person Altar of Wishes
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that this chapter has to be the best. It was filled with emotion and detail. Most authors think that dialogue equals story, but it doesn't— it's just a script, but you've got this right. Side note: I tend to block Karasu out of my mind unless he's with Hiei... *drools* Yeah, somebody promised me a Karasu¤Hiei story...
person kit-kit
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah you go kurama you tell that boy you had yusuke first and you still have him evan can kiss your ass. anyway i know what happen to kurama he got hit by a car but i hope that will be yusuke breaking point so that he can tell kurama that he still love him and i hope kurama doesn't die like yusuke did before yusuke can re confess his feelings.