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for The Betrayal

by vampmistress76

person Abby
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was hot! Go Keiko! I'm interested to see how the threesome develops!
person Joe
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is GREAT! I never really thought of Hiei and Kurama both loving her but I have to say that they fit together VERY well. I can't WAIT for a next chapter!!
person Kuramasbluegurl
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh i loved the way this turned out
i love all your stories
thanks for the great read
person Sandi
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!
person KogasHentaiLuver
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So fucking good. You rock my world. I love, love, love this fic. I'm so glad that you decided to continue it. Thank you. Can't wait for more.
person Death Phoenix
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful!!! Keep up the great work!!! Update really really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person dunken
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
too cool! i loved it. wow, the timing was great, though it was probably more coincidental on my part but that doesn't matter, i still enjoyed it. i have to admit, i didn't see the trio coming but i kinda like. can't wait to read more! :)
person Alaskantiger
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for shaing this chapter! Three way bond mating thing. Cool. I can't wait to read the next chapter! I wonder what they'll do to Yusuke when they get ahold of him. Please hurry with the next chapter! :)
person dunken
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! another great story started! you have no idea how unbelievably addicted i am to your fics. i've even reread several of them. oh, and while i'm usually very much a kurama fan, i decided to read this and and it's so good, of course. now, since you have me addicted, please, please, please, update soon. also, if you could updat boc that would be greatly appreciated too but i understand that things happen and it can take awhile to update, shoot, i haven't updated my fic all summer. oops. :( even though i can't really talk about updates, i'm still gonna request one soon. :) hehe. til next time!:)
person Death Phoenix
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this so far!!!! Please please please Update REALLY REALLY soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!