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for The Betrayal

by vampmistress76

person haleygace
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it update soon.
person L
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still very good, i cannot wait for next chapter :)
person Atropa
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to more chapters of this story. It was a great story to start my day with...
person kuramasbluegurl
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CUTE!!!
I love your stories!!! thanks for the update
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snorts* I loved the ending to this. Even Hiei needs to be shaken up every once in awhile. And I'm glad Kurama's patched things up with his mother. Always like to see favorite characters end up happily.

Will be looking forward to seeing what Hiei will do to comfort her. =D
person Starcrossed
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE!!! I love it! Never been much of a Kurama/Keiko/Hiei fan but I think this story might just change that...Anyways! Continue its really good, update soon!
person Supi-chan1026
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, love it. write more soon
pretty please.....
*huggles*
-Courtney
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keiko is one lucky girl. Great story, can't wait for Hiei to get home
person Agirl
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Different. Never read a Kurama-Keiko-Hiei fic. Me like! U know i'm surprised that Kurama didn't morph into his demon form while they were...ahem...'bonding'. ~_^ Kurama is a cutie(so is Hiei), but Youko...he's just flat out gorgeous. Keiko, u lucky girl u! Anyhoo it's good to see that Hiei and Kurama are getting used to each other and that his mom is going to visit him. Wonder how things will go. Update soon! ^_^
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is an awesome story, please update soon.