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for The Betrayal

by vampmistress76

person Biokinetic
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_OAWESOME!
I've never even HEARD of a story like this, and how you potray Hiei and Kurama, along with Keiko's teasing side..is magnificent..I have a sinking feeling you might not have updated this story in a long time because its a yu yu hakusho fanfic and most of the fanfiction writers who were hooked on it have long since left the stories half finished.
PLEASE don't let this be one of those cases. I only go for yaoi, but this story was a exception, even if it did have a bit of Kurama/Hiei
Beautiful..wonderful story. Please update soon
person angel eyes
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fan-freaking-tastic!!
person QUIX MIX
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESME STORY!

UPDATE SOON!!!
person Joe
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! I don't know why I like thid couple so mcuh but I do and I really can't wait for the next chapter and what Hiei will do. Please update soon!
person Abbychanb
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! this has to be the best K/K/H threeway I have ever read! Hey its the best threeway period! Gotta say just love the way CH. 5 ended!! He tripped! lol! Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person noomma
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic! Are you going to finish it? I was a bit leery about reading it since it wasn't a Yusuke/Keiko fic, but your summary caught my attention! I never would have thought it but a Hiei/Keiko/Kurama works for me! Please! Finish it! Thanks!
person Cat
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. All I have to say is wow. I absoloutly love your writing style, and I've read all of your Yu Yu Hakusho fics. Please please please continue with this one! I also am very pleased with your pairings, especially the Hiei/Keiko/Kurama, but plain ol' Hiei/Keiko and Kurama/Keiko are great too. Your so descriptive in your stories, please update them all soon, very soon. Very very very soon. Your writitng inspires me to write. I write of Fictionpress and Fanfiction as Kai Kaida. You're really an inspiration. If you wish to IM me, which I seriously doubt, you may reach me at Faerie Candle. I < 3 you! Keep it up, and keep writing! You go girl! I'm rooting for ya! Peace out, yo.
person Anna
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!! I'm glad that things worked out for Kurama involving his mother. I'm anxious to hear Hiei's response to Keiko's worries. Keep up the excellent work! Please, please update soon!!!
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aiee! Such long chapters! It took me a little while to read them all so I had to stop and come back a couple of times. But now I've read 1-5, and I have to say this is a great fic! I've never seen anything quite like it. And I love the originality of it all. ^ ^; *snicker* Hiei tripped!

Keep it up, I can't wait for the next chapter!
person eyesofobidesian
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG whens the next chapter? and when can i slap yusuke?