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for The Betrayal

by vampmistress76

person Lonely lust
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's over.... Damn, I'm really addicted to this story! It's really good and I'm enjoying it a lot. I love the relationship you have goin here too! I can't wait to read more!!!
person kana
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god this was the best story between kurama and kieko and hiei ive ever read.

thanks for writing it and kept up the good work !!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please, please tell me you are continuing this story. I especially would like to see if there are any developments in Hiei and Kurama's part in the relationship. It's not very often you find a good story and I absolutely love this one.
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am glad beyond words that you have your internet back and can now continue with this wonderful story!
I really LOVE this fik from you and hope you update soon.
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
um...eep! Poor Keiko! ;_; *huggles Keiko* I hope it's nothing serious...I mean...her parents haven't even met the boys yet!
person Alaskantiger
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! I can't wait to read more!! Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)
person Kuramasbluegurl
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, how sad. Poor Keiko, well at least she has some good support from her mates.
Can't wait for the next update.
person Sandi59
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you are continuing this story! I can't wait for the next installment.
person Morwen Re
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good job! i really, really like this fic and was reading it on mediaminer.org, but you stopped updating there.... i found it here, and just read the new chapter. please tell me that you will update again soon, please!
person Tazzy
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am completely loving this story! The unique idea of mates in the Makai is interesting and exciting now that Kurama's mother knows of his heiritage and his relationships. *grins* Please update soon.