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for The Betrayal

by vampmistress76

person Missy B AKA razielslittleflamekaat
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh this is amazing! Tell me you're muse is ok because I so want this story to continue. Please update soonest!
person HannaFO
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you someday decide to pick this story up again cuz I really liked it :)
schedule March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What's going to happen what's going to happen?!?! This better not be the end! It's too good of a fic for this to be the end!!! So, Please, assuage my fears of future lack of closure. Please!!!!!

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person Roseanddragongirl
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your doing a great job. Could you write more? I'm interested in knowing how Kurama and Hiei get her back.
person puppydog
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What evil grandparents!!!! I hate them!!!!! Love the story!^-^ Please continue!
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. I'm not sure what to say on this, but it was great!!!! Keep up the great work, and hopefully, we'll see an update soon!!!
person 66Hiei08
schedule October 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm on the edge of my seat.. Please update soon.. Don't make me beg!
person Keikura
schedule September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story please post more chapters, I read the eighth chapter on your Journal though
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I'd never been much for threesomes but this has a good storyline and is well written. I'll be waiting for the next chapter^_^
person rice ball ^^
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! PLEASE FINISH IT!! >.< I NEEEEEED THIS STORY!!! YOU WRITE SO WELL! I LOVE HOW YOU USE YOUR WORDING AND IMAGERY IN THE LOVE SCENES AND THE REGULAR ONES...JUST PRETTY PLEASE WITH SUGAR ON TOP?!! *POUNCEGLOMPHUGGLE* it would be GREATLY appreciated *puuurrrr* heheh