rate_review Reviews

For some reason it was sweet. I liked it.

Very nice one-shot! It would be interesting if you did a sequel one-shot that had Keiko flashing back. That way we could see more of how the two got together. Not to mention, that it would give us Keiko's POV. Just a thought. Either way, I loved it! ^_^

Nice. But when did Hiei warm up to Keiko? And what was going thru her mind when she (i'm guessing) was looking for Hiei? How did she know where to find him? :) All in all this fic was really good. But it raised a lot of questions as well. :P Update??

Nice drabble.
well written.

cdk

This is an Amazing storie with a great plot line. One small minuet problem. YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT AS A ONE SHOT. I MEAN IT IS JUST TO GOOD. Try telling us how it went from her crying on his chest and then leaving to them making wild monkey love together. You have left us on a cliff edge with out a rope. Throw us a line. Give us two more chapters or a prequel/sequel. I'm gegging you.

I can count on the fingers of one hand the number of pure het YYH stories I've read. Not counting the evil Mary Sues, which I'm sometimes tricked into reading. The reason I avoid them is simple: Except for the Yusuke/Keiko- and the Kuw Kuwa/Yukina- fi the there is never any kind of reason, let alone development, in the pairing. Glad to see you not only acknowledged the existence of Keiko's canon mate but also added a reason for her being with Hiei. Aside from this ranting, I also wanted to say this was a good, well-written fic with spelling and grammar that are recognizably English.