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for Embrace the Darkness

by SonSeta

person Glabrezubane
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it took so long to get around to reading the new chaps. Heh. Amusing. They fall so easily to the darkness within, saying they will never bend or break, yet watch how easily they do. Mind you, as I've said before, I think you're going a bit easy on them. I mean, seriously, why stop at Yusuke and Kuwarbara when you can rip apart Yu and and Keiko's lives, too? It's not like it's all that difficult... *sinister grin*
person ko-krama
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn... no more lemons? Oh well, I'll survive on my imagination (^___^)V

Awwwww, you're so sweet- I'm glad you like them. 'Cause I sure as hell enjoy reviewing!

... I dunno... I'm not even sure if I want him to except or not- whichever is the less painful road to death I guess (the song pla playing now "Killing Me Softly..." - deja vu anyone?)

Love and torturous huggles,
Ko-krama
person ko-krama
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your welcome (^_^)

Kurama now? Unnnnn... I'm gunna miss him. I'll have to put on a stoic persona to survive this one- to tell you honestly I was almost relieved... until Kurama didn't accept the offer. WHYYYYYYYY!?! (T~T)

It's okay though, love ya anyways... (U_U)

Love, Ko-krama
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So, so good. I love they way you're having Kurama and Yoko interact with each other. Keep going. Can't wait to read more.
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O poor Kurama... couldnt confess his love =[. Is this really the end?! IT CANT BE! please update soon =]
person ko-krama
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story was really sad (T_T)- Poor Kurama... I like the story I guess (^_^);;; you're definately a good writer though!

Nevertheless, I wanna know what happens next!!! (^o^)

Love, Ko-krama

person KogasHentaiLuver
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is your story and you can kill off whomever you want. I still enjoyed it. I can't wait to see how you wrap things up. You've done a wonderful job. I can't wait to see what you write next. Good luck!!!!!!!!
person comicfancat
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what did you just do ! you killed hiei . don't like that idea at all. frowning ....
person mz.bitz.
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW. let me say taht first. I'm usually very picky about my OCs, this one isnt bad. PLease update soon. Hiei's feelings leading to dillusions. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE.
person Glabrezubane
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
They bleed. Unceasingly, they bleed. Blast you, Flamewing. Blast you to the deepest pits of Tarterus. You've scarred me for life. Still, I can't say that it was badly written... Because it was written beautifully... at least as much of the scene as I could force myself to read through the blood. *shakes head* I just hope that the next chap is more violence, less yaoi....