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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Been a while since I checked up on this little project of yours. Certainly made interesting developments... A few things to consider, though. First, this is getting a little too light-hearted. Embrace the Darkness... perhaps we should see a bit more of the darkness and less of the embrace? It's an interesting development to see them apart, but one must ask: isn't there always a price to pay, beyond the price that they are already paying? And when are the assassinations going to take place? Doesn't the Goddess care about it any more? Or was she doing this all along, not out of revenge, but out of a desire for the companionship of Youko and Kurama? Just some thoughts... it would be interesting to see a darker, more sinister Suuichi, even if that innocence is part of his charm to you. SOrry about logging off so suddenly the other day. My dad would have pulled the plug on the comp if I hadn't, so the connection would have been killed anyway... Good luck with this, it's coming along nicely. I'm interested in seeing where you might be going with this...
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm here. I just lost the link for a LONG time. :D I'm gonna read chapters 9 and 10 later tonight, and I'll revew again later but I LOVE YUSUKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D I'm great with a lemon, even though I'm not the biggest Kurama/parts of Kurama fan. And that sounded dirty :)
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December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would absolutely love a lemon. In my opinion that would make an already great story even better. I don't know why your readers don't review, it's a great story. I just finished reading the entire thing in like fifteen minutes. Oh well. Please post the next chapter soon.
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story. Keep it up!
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September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I had no idea that you were so alone!!! <--would have reviewed sooner, but was attacked by hungry crazy monkeys...
Anywayz, what i want...hm...don't you think that Kurama and Suichi would miss Hiei...alot? Maybe you could write a flashback lemon along with a renewed hatred for the lady???
Anywayz, what i want...hm...don't you think that Kurama and Suichi would miss Hiei...alot? Maybe you could write a flashback lemon along with a renewed hatred for the lady???
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im too lazy to sign in right now.. Anyways.. youko and suichi may be seperated?! IM SO EXCITED. hehehe. im still sad hiei died. =[[[ i haventn abn able to read for so long since sept started. please please update. =]
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I was in shock when Hiei died. Quite a turn that I wasn't expecting. That was sad . . . Anyway, I haven't read this chapter yet (I will tonight,) but I know how you said you were going to kill all the characters (or torture them) and as sadistic as that sounds, I can't wait. Though I'll be really sad if Yuusuke dies. He's my favorite . . . Anyway, keep writing!
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omgosh. WOW. I cant believe i missed all these chapter when i was away from the computer! i would have reviewed each and every one! LOLS. Let me say, this is progressing beautifully. WHAT WILL KURAMA DO!? i dont even know what to say for this review. Anyway, Update soon =]
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August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well damn, this was definately more emotional and delivered a very... original twist! Bravo!
But I got one question... where the hell is everybody!?! I'm starting to feel bad about you not getting reviewed much... that probably hurts (-_-)
Gods, but anyway. Damn straight, I LOATHE cliffies. Especially when it's a lemon and the characters are about to do the dirty... and then it just stops and says "Wait till next chap' guys!" ... Tease ...
About my feelings on story, I actually think I like it now (damn you and yer cunning writer ways)
Love,
Ko-krama
But I got one question... where the hell is everybody!?! I'm starting to feel bad about you not getting reviewed much... that probably hurts (-_-)
Gods, but anyway. Damn straight, I LOATHE cliffies. Especially when it's a lemon and the characters are about to do the dirty... and then it just stops and says "Wait till next chap' guys!" ... Tease ...
About my feelings on story, I actually think I like it now (damn you and yer cunning writer ways)
Love,
Ko-krama
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August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... I take that back... Glabrezubane gave you... THE BEST DAMN REVIEW I'VE EVER SEEN!!!
Kudos, dude v(^_^)v
Kudos, dude v(^_^)v