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for My Pretty Knife

by EmbersEye

person Lindsay
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy shit, very deep, nice, i loved it
person Yukyo Kazuma
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. I can really imagine Keiko going psycho like that. I'll give it five stars for being dark and scary.
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was really sad but I loved it.
person cillaxox
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so GOOD! I've never been so entranced with a story like I was there. Your writing is really good too. Great story
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. You are a very good author! Keep up the great work!
person Abby
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sad interesting yet very insightful of what the future could hold for Yusuke/Keiko.
person Liz
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love how you ended this story. Through the whole thing, I was thinking to myself that while the story itself was all right, the main character bore no resemblance to the Keiko we know. But the ending showed you had that covered, and it was a nice twist.
person angelus_2040
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad, but it was really good.