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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter I think you're doing a fine job. So continue
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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice and detailed. I'm liking your use of vocabu, an, and the plot seems to be original and well thought out. Please continue.
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, really. They're all in character, and it seems interesting so far. One thing though...don't you thik you're ma Kur Kurama speak too formally? I know that he does speak somewhat like that, but the way he speaks now just sounds too...well...formal.
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I would like to read more of this. So, keep going. Thanks. :)
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, cool beginning! Just, don't stop there! I think I'm hooked and with just the first chapter thats a feat. Keep up the great work.
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so far so good so continued
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. I would like it if you updated soon, and nice original plot ^-^;