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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Due to technical difficulties, I cannot sign in right now. I wanted to leave you a review anyway.
I know this story will be sad. I have known it from the beginning. Yet I still hope that there is a happy ending. I know; I'm soft. But still. The way you write brings me so close to the characters that a character death will be traumatic. I'd better just brace myself, huh?
I really love the way you write the characters. It's very believable and very comfortable. It's like being around old friends. Does that make sense? They are the same characters I grew to know in the anime, and you write them so naturally that I feel I have known them for a very long time. Whether it makes sense or not, I mean it as a compliment.
Very nice update. I await, and yet dread, your next update. I await it because I know it will be as good as the rest. I dread it because I know it will bring me one step closer to a tragedy that will most likely haunt me for some time. Still, I will read faithfully.
I know this story will be sad. I have known it from the beginning. Yet I still hope that there is a happy ending. I know; I'm soft. But still. The way you write brings me so close to the characters that a character death will be traumatic. I'd better just brace myself, huh?
I really love the way you write the characters. It's very believable and very comfortable. It's like being around old friends. Does that make sense? They are the same characters I grew to know in the anime, and you write them so naturally that I feel I have known them for a very long time. Whether it makes sense or not, I mean it as a compliment.
Very nice update. I await, and yet dread, your next update. I await it because I know it will be as good as the rest. I dread it because I know it will bring me one step closer to a tragedy that will most likely haunt me for some time. Still, I will read faithfully.
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was crying it was just so sad. Poor koenma, and botan thought deeply. I love your fic!!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, i'm glad you updated.
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*falls over from awasomeness of the stroy* This is flippen AWASOME!!! You could (and should) write pro! The lemon was so loving and sad and, and, *breaks down crying* This is the best story I've read on hear. Please let it have a happy ending!
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's back! You're back! Yay! This story has stuck with me since I first read it, and I had thought maybe you were not going to continue it. I am very glad to see you posted another chapter, and I enjoyed that chapter very much. No pressure to rush, but I do look forward to your next update. I feel really sad for everyone, though. I mean, hie and Kurama have to go through all of that just to be together and be able to tell each other how they know they fel. Koenma has to give up Hanako, and the poor girl goes willingly to her fate. After all of this, Kurama knows he is dying, so even this bright love the demons share may be short lived. (I say maybe with a glimmer of hope... But I doubt that is in the cards. That just means the fic will haunt me even more, in the morose kind of way.) Anyway, this chapter will stick with me as well, I am sure. This story is haunting (in a good way so far) and again, i look forward to more.
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i've been waiting for the update 4 like a really long time cuz i luv ur story and yea....
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heartbreaking and beautiful. Welcome back. The chapter might be short, but it packs a powerful punch -- all the more so from the light warmth of the beginning with just a few much darker notes, to the smooth transition to ever darker, with a few very bright (but not happy) notes at the end.
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December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I just L-O-V-E love this fic sooooo much!!! It gets better every chapter that I read!!! Yay!!! ^__^ I can't believe that I actually got the meaning for Morana's name right!!! I have never "won" anything before, and it was so much fun trying to figure it out, too!!! *bounces up and down and "sparkles"* Wheeeeee!!! Oh, and btw.....you asked for a beta reader? *raises hand and waves it around wildly* I volunteer, I voluteer, pick me!!! I'm pretty good with English, if I do say so myself...*is getting an above 100% average in her English class....heh....* ...oh, and I just adore your writing style... *shrugs* Just an offer -- let me know if you're interested!!! Gtg...it's Christmas, after all!!! ^__^ Thanks for updating!!! Ja ne!!!
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December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very beautiful! Your writing is getting better and better as this story progresses
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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I feel kinda' stupid right now, 'cause I finally checked to see if you updated, and then (after my celebration dance was completed, of course ^__~) I only made it through your AN at the beginning before I felt the urge to update! Why, you might ask? Well, two reasons, actually: one, I know that this chapter is going to be just as good as the previous ones, and this saves me a bit of time, and two, I KNOW WHY YOU CHOSE THE NAME MORANA!!! *And yes, before you ask, I did go and do research on this a couple of weeks ago, because I just had to find out what the answer was!!!* Morana means death, and in Slavic mythology it was the name of the goddess of winter and death. Well? Am I right??? I am, aren't I??? ^^;; I sure hope so.......... let me know (a.k.a. update ASAP), and keep up the good work!!! Ja ne!!!