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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think this story is alright will you, make another chapter?
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July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you should try making another Youko and Botan ifc in the future
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July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i thought it was about teasing but its good
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude...that was good. I don't read Kurama and Botan storys, but I read yours and I loved it. It was really good. You should write more like this.
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey not bad at all. You had some nice suspense going in there.
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love Botan and Kurama stories.....and your was really good....I seen that type of descriptived writing style before, and yours was good. Bringing more meaning to words over and over again....to bad it was a one-shot...you could really bring out the story more....in all, Good job.....I hope you will write some more