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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heehee, thanks for answering the questions about the oath. ^_^ So what does the sneaky little fox have in mind for revenge? Revenge is a dish best served cold, -a famous quote, thought it would be fitting. Anywho, please update soon! =P
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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well done! A convincing explanation for why Kurama takes his oath so seriously, even given his partner's sacrifice. You've added even more depth to the characters and the world in which they dwell, making the story richer. I particularly love Kurama's careful plan, including using honesty to support his deceit, and his hidden grief deferred until later with acknowledgment of the cost.
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. Can't wait to see where you take it.
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you finally updated this story,(thought you forgot about it).Can't wait to see what else happens and what Hiei thinks
about what happen.Is Hiei going to tie Kurama's hands up to follow him or is it only on trust now?Please update soon since this
chapter was so small pleassse. :)
about what happen.Is Hiei going to tie Kurama's hands up to follow him or is it only on trust now?Please update soon since this
chapter was so small pleassse. :)
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well i guess your write i prob. shouldn't stress over it but anyway i liked the last chapter it was interesting but if you don't want me to get stressed you should updatePLEASE!!!!!!!!):
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Neato! Very kewl idea...I like it alot!!! I find it interesting how you changed the way Kuronue dies...I don't mind, though, 'cause it adds a nice plot twist to the story. I also really enjoyed the way you chose to portray Hiei, as well as the way the fic is from his POV. I can't wait to find out what happens, expecially now that Hiei and Kurama have met up w/ each other! Keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!! Ja ne!!!
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great i love your story so im hoping youll update soon, sorry for not reading it sooner, that was real stupid of me and im hoping you will update soon PLEASE!!! again i really really really thought your story was wonderfull no great no better than great so please update soon
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*speechless after reading four chapters at once* too, much ... too much at one time . . . too much goodness at one time ... ... ... of course im not saying u have no faults but WOW u write good!!! scratch that, make that WELL *mumbling* unlike myself BUT NEVER MIND THAT! I WAANNNTTTT more MUCH, MUCH MORE! Well, i guess im not speechless anymore. ^,^
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oops . . . forgot to mention how much i liked the lemon *grin* im not good at writing lemons, and, although this was hiei with KUROUNE, i still liked it. however chopped-like it was. i want u to write another! ur better then i ever could be but no matter.
MORE, gorannsai-ka
MORE, gorannsai-ka
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm in love with this story! ^.^ I'm quite interested in seeing what's going to happen, as I havt bet been let down yet. The Karasu x Hiei scene was grand! ^^