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for Unbalanced Pendulum

by EmbersEye

person Yamistar (not logged in)
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*stamps foot* How dare you leave me hangin' like that!!!! I wanna know what happens! *throws self onto the ground and begins to kick and scream like a child* Can we say "freak" boys and girls? *nods* I'm not crazy, I'm a psycopath. *pulls on purple shirt* I've got the white coat. *laughs* Lame, ne? ~Ys
person Dark_KittyCat
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well so far i like all chapters and congrants on you getting the yyh dvd collection anyways i hope you update soon im very impatient so i tend to give up on a story if i have to wait long but i am trying to break that habit besides this story is too good to give up on!
person Yamistar(not logged in)
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!! I totally love this story! I was lookin' for it on MM.org, but I couldn't find it! So, I came here to look for it, and here it is with a new chapter that I've yet to read! Please update soon, I need to know what happens! ~Ys
person Golden
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I little bit of each.... sometimes, it is better for the reader to figure out on his or her own what the charater's are thinking. But sometimes, since it is the charater's mind, sometimes it is better to actually discribe what is going on inside of it. So a mix of both would be really good ^.^ Keep up this fic, it's so awsome!!! I look forward to reading the next chapter!!!!! ^______^!!!!!!!

TTFN! Ta Ta For Now!
person blackfiredragon
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an excelent story. You're a very talented author, and I look forward to reading future chapters.
person Golden
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow wow wow wow wow!!!! Update soon! This is very very very good! I can't wait to read more!!!!!!!
person IrIdEsCeNt_MoOn
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good. superb. splendid!!!! I love this story,please continue
person Dark_KittyCat
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay im glad you updated and the chapter was wonderful i loved it and i hope you decide to update soon!!!!!!!please!!!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated!!! Go you!!! ^__^ Oh, and I'm so glad that you liked my name! That made my day! If you are ever interested as to how I came up with it, or why, just let me know -- I'll review and tell you! Keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!! Ja ne!!!
person comicfancat
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool so far,whats next,update soon pleaseeee!