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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this has a lot of character development. I like it....I like how you portray Hiei and Kurama. I felt badly over Karasu's death...mostly over how it was orchestrated to be meaningless...I'm not really sure what else to say, thought I do look forward to reading more.
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That was so freaky! But it was so cool! Please update again, real soon! I tell ya this story is addictive! Addictive I say! ~Ys
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHH That was eerie. I love how you write with such description. ::shivers:: Update soon =]
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was sweet in a strange, sadistic sort of way... but I still loved it. Great job, and continue to update!
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heya!! Poor Kurama!! Tch, Hiei shouldn't be that disgusted with a sign of fear, after all, didn't he have his own? It seems they are helping each other. What did the First want? What will happen to them? Please update soon!
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh, this is good. really good. I like the style. and the fic's very different from all the other hiei/kurama stories out there. original. (darn I sound like I can't form a coherent sentence). anyway, keep going!!
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW, I really liek thsi fic so far. You have an interesting storyline and good desc. and all. PLease do upate soon=]
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-Wails- I don’t know why the review things hate me...they never take the full review! TT_TT Once again I love the delicious way you string together your descriptions combining Youko’s infatuated followers and his godliness in the same light. You say that Youko has a cult of chimeras? Since when? I thought he had a little league of thieves but I didn’t know them all to be chimeras; look at Yomi-sama. ._.? But its okay... I’ll attribute that to the AU plot line and the fact that rumors get screwed over a lot when induced by fear on the pedestal of one like Youke Kurama. –bites lips- Karasu giggles? Whats up with that XD When I first read your little something extra scene I thought wow... mindless rutting here but now that I think about it really after setting an insurance price like that it was somewhat called for. ^^; Great scene by the way... hard to believe that it’s your first. (Not that I support that pairing per say but at the risk of sounding like Paris Hilton here; that was hot. X3) And thus the chapter ends; very good over all!
Fav. Line: there’s no one line, I like the whole lemon scene
Fav. Line: there’s no one line, I like the whole lemon scene
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning... I like the adding of the pendulum thing in the very beginning and how we’re kind of just thrown into the story line within the first paragraph; very nice. Its all unarguably good until the oreste thing... I don’t understand why you’re telling us all about this demon when he’s a mere lackey. ...Unless your trying to insinuate that Karasu is the oreste demon... >< Cool concept but kind of irrelevant. ><; One prone to such detail as you really gives me little to gripe on. –sigh-
Fav. Line: His voice reminded me of silk over velvet, smooth in each syllable and not too deep in sound. I could not help but notice that, under all of his meal’s grime, he was an attractive man.
I know, I know, its two lines but they go hand in hand.
-kat
Fav. Line: His voice reminded me of silk over velvet, smooth in each syllable and not too deep in sound. I could not help but notice that, under all of his meal’s grime, he was an attractive man.
I know, I know, its two lines but they go hand in hand.
-kat
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! This is really a wunderful story! I love the pendulum symbolism at the beginning. Please update soon!!!!