rate_review Reviews

Great story! Its very visual and greatly detailed. The plot will suck a reader in, hope to see more!

You came back! *in monotone* Just when you thought it was safe to get back into the writer's feel of everything...Think again! *chuckles* nah, just kidin'. That was great! But, read my text. I. Want. Fluff! Must have fluff! Any kind will do. But please, make the short one the bottom feeder *wink wink* A short guy on top of a taller then hell guy is kinda...weird. If ya know what I mean. ~Ys

O.O gasp. What will Hiei do. This is indeed a very dark story as you stated in your description. Do update soon. =]

Incredibly detailed and wonderful chapter. This must be a torment to write! Thank you. I love your style. :D

*stamps foot* I hate you!!!!!!!! Why did u leave it there?!?!?!?!??! Now, I have to wait until you update again!!! *sits on butt and cries like a little baby* Waaaaaaa!!!! It's not fair! I need to know what's gonna happen!!!! I NEED to know! For your sake, I hope you update soon. Unless you like Saturn's moons!!! *evol laugh* Please update!!!! ~Ys

Please update this soon, because I really enjoy this story...

omg. i luv this fic. its soo goood!!!!! its like a show or a movie! and i luv how u switch points of view a lot hehehehe. soo detailed. ur amazing.!!!!!!! XD hahah. update soo. wanna c/read wut happenes next!

Okay, I had just read chapter 1 – 4 but I could tell that this story has an interesting plot. You put them all in action, man! All of them who might have a feeling towards Kurama! Karasu, Hiei, Kuronue… (why don’t you include Yomi?)… this is unique indeed. Kurama was Kuronue’s lover, but Hiei killed the bat and started to develop feeling for his captor but he supposes to hand the fox to his employer who want Kurama as well! Ooooohhh, as Miss Buenagirl might say: the drama, drama, drama! ^o^ (But you killed Kuronue!! *teary eyed*) Oh well, I’ll keep up with this fanfic anyways. After all, it’s hard to find Youko Kurama’s fic that written coherently with just enough details these days (though you could be a little bit wordy at times----*reads his own fanfic and notes his own hideous fondness of unnecessary flowery words*who am I to talk?*hangs his head in shame v.v; *----but that still okay^____^). Will come back later to read more!

Interesting ficcie, I especially like the interaction between Y and OC in the beginning. It did a nice job setting up Y's personality and creating a kind of foreboding. I liked the pendulum reference, too; very fitting with the theme of the fic so far, and also very effectively foreboding since it's clear something chaotic/unexpected is on the rise. I like that you're keeping an air of mystery to it, and I'm completely unsure which direction you'll end up taking the fic. Intriguing piece of work, looking foreward to more.

It's been awhile a YYH fic has caught my insterest. I'm eager to see more so please keep up! it's delicious.