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for Unbalanced Pendulum

by EmbersEye

person Mz.Bitz.
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I haven't reviewed this story in so long. So let me get started.. WOW to another chapter of beautiful details and character development. I love how you portray the characters, they're different from the usual characterizations that most authors use. And I LOVE that the story is more complex than most, keeping my eyes scrolling =D Looking forward to the next update!
person CrimsonFox
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your ideas are absolutely astounding and have so much depth. It's so amazing... The story is so intriguing, please update as soon as possible.
person Evelyn
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WoW This story is really good. I like all the detail and stuff, and as for people who dont like reading all that, just read the first and last lines of each paragraph.
Update soon!
Eve
person madameshannon
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm........ i don't quite know yet what i think. don't get me wrong! this is a beautiful fic, well written and delightfully engaging. i finished the completed chapters in a single sitting and looked away from the screen not once. i believe that i will wait for the fic to be completed entirely before i let myself have an opinion. but my curiosity is most definetly peaked. thank you. oh here, you have most asureadly earned a rose @---^---
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful chapter, excellent length and detail. The emotions portrayed are perfect. Great job, update soon please.
person Naisakeme
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEE!!! I *love* this fic! Please, *please* update, preferably before I go totally insane with curiousity!
person shihiko jaganshi
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My God, i RARELY read yaoi fics but this one is very intriguing and VERY well written. I look forwards to reading the rest of this story.

Tchao

Shihiko
person hColleen
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, so the romance begins...after a sort...interesting chapter...I like this story...sorry, I'm not awake yet so it's difficult to come up with comments....my only complaint is that it was short! I look forward to your next chapter.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! *does the happy dance* Que the romance!!! Finally!!!!! ^___~ Thanks for updating -- keep up the good work!!!
person Mz.Bitz.
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DO MY EYES DECEIVE ME! ROMANCE IS GOING TO BEGIN! I LOVE ROMANCE! YAY!!! I just can't get over how well-written this fic is and how beautifully everything is described. EVERY DETAIL IS PERFECT. Update soon! =]