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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really awesome... in a rather frightening way... but I love it anyway. Please update soon. I'm very curious as to how the two actually feel about one another, because Kurama doesn't seem to see hiei as nothing more than his atonement and Hiei sees Kurama as something to be owned. Is he still giving Kurama to Karasu? Sorry, I might have missed that answer.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel sorry for those who were "spared" on good, ol' ff.net. They missed out. I really liked this chapter, it was very intense. Their desperation is almost intoxicating, and I can't help but wonder where this will end. Hiei is, after all, under contract. And Youko, he's pretty much stuck. But stuck with Hiei. As scary and terrifying and alone and downright not good as that is, it's still makes for a good story.
I look forward to your next update!!
I look forward to your next update!!
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still you amze me with your writing.. it has gotten better not that it wasnt better to begin with heh. This chapter was awsome please continue -gives her a whole bunch of cookies/brownies-
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an...odd chapter...but, then, it fits the story. My only complaint (geesh, I'm whiny) is that it was so long since the last chapter I had to go back and read it over again. I like it...I look forward to what you do with them next. Please don't keep us waiting so long...pretty please.
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KWAII!!!!!!!!! that was soo cute, but at the same time, STUPID FOOLISH HIEI. I get the feeling that Karasu will be back, damn him!! Update, PLEASE!!
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! It's so good, but it must take a long time to type, unless you're a really fast typist. Well, I have to say this is my favorite story. So update as often as you can. (I know you probably already are)
Thanks,
Eve
Thanks,
Eve
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heey yey you updated, but please do so again. I like this chapter muchos but so did a bunch i am betting.
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a nice one. it took me 3 days to read but it was awesome. i loved it and your interpritations of everything and how they reacted to each other. i sound like a teacher praising a performance. hee hee. see-ya, i enjoyed it. hurry up and right!
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was great. hurry up and write!
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Different then anything I've read on Hiei and Kurama, i like it so far.