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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...there's a lot in that chapter...very good...I really don't know what else to say...I had more thoughts while reading it, but now they've flown away. Poor Hiei! Interesting how Kurama compared being caught to Hiei's dislike for the rain...makes the koorime think a little more about what he's doing. I can see their developing emotions...but what of Karasu...I look forward to your next update.
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another great chapter. The characters are becoming incredibly sweet, which i hadn't expected, but I absolutely love. I hope Hiei doesn't really have to give Kurama to Karasu, because the fox seems like he really is starting to like Hiei, and not just manipulating him anymore.
Hm... Angra... Um, Anagram? That's the only word that comes to mind. It sounds Celtic, but I don't really know that language and I'm more than likely pronouncing the name wrong, so never mind.
Anyway, please update soon, I need to know what happens with them!
Hm... Angra... Um, Anagram? That's the only word that comes to mind. It sounds Celtic, but I don't really know that language and I'm more than likely pronouncing the name wrong, so never mind.
Anyway, please update soon, I need to know what happens with them!
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
crow - Karasu: I did in an abstract sort of way. It was along the lines of 'hmmm, crow... that reminds me: wasn't Karasu the one who hired Hiei? *ponder*' (er, it's been a bit since I read the first few chapters).
in regards to chapter 14: a hunt! I think I enjoyed that waaayyy too much. it's one of my kinks. *g*. One of my favourite chapters so far.
good work!
in regards to chapter 14: a hunt! I think I enjoyed that waaayyy too much. it's one of my kinks. *g*. One of my favourite chapters so far.
good work!
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutly love ur writting style! ahh soo good. and no not really hahaha. untill u told me that is. XP. i'm a bit slow in the head. anyway. i really wanna c wut happens next. and poor Kurama and Hiei. TnT. update soon. <3<3<3
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey do you have like a way to tell people you updated? And Im not sure If I can get it to show but to make things italic/bold you must do [<*i*> and <*/i*> if that didnt work I probably look like a idiot trying to show you. Its the same html as p, but with a i or b, though you must close it by doing the same with a /i or /b and >> Srry If you already knew or something -walks of confused and such- o_o
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
....haha, you read my mind. I had a feeling that the 'crow' had SOMETHING to do with Karasu. And what do you know?!?! Lol, anyway, I love this story...it's very good. And chapter 14 had the most delicious lemon in it. We need another one of those...just...I dunno. Are you gonna make Kurama dominant? *shudders* Not that I'll hate the story if you do...Kurama, even Youko, just doesnt seem dominant to me. I guess Im just crazy.
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I'm Nikkler and I just started reading it today. I have to say that I'm really sad that there are not anymore chapters. This is a great fanfic. I can't wait to see what happens. Huggles
Nikkler
Nikkler
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, that was quick...and good, too. I like how things are uncertain...how neither of them really knows what to do now...where they stand. As I said of the lemon. it fits with the relationship they've developed...the oddness...the strangeness that brought them and bound them together. I look forward to see how things work when Karasu makes his presence known...that will place Hiei in quite a conundrum, I think...
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I am so happy that the pendulum has swung again, yet as you showed toward the end, how much it has swung and the eventual outcome is still unclear (to this reader at least)! I shamed to admit that I did not make the connection between the crows and Karasu until he showed up, which was yet another surprise -- but a delightful one. I hope Kurama and Hiei find their way to safety in the end, and very eagerly await more.
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an incredibly sweet scene with Kurama daydreaming of telling an innocent Hiei the children's story, and I want to see them grow even closer together as Karasu closes in on them. Please update soon.