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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is awesome. I think it needs to be written and continued. I think Sensui needs to eventually die painfully. I think you're creative and a very good writer. You keep this story going. K.
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well its not the best in the world but most aren't......
very nicely done I hope you contiue and update soon.
Ja! ^_^
very nicely done I hope you contiue and update soon.
Ja! ^_^
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
waahhhh!!! thats soo mean !!!but it was written welll nice little shota boy...! ah gomen.
yes yes....its good enough to be continued and updated and such...hai!
yes yes....its good enough to be continued and updated and such...hai!
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally an author that doesn't make child abuse/molestation/rape and all that other stuff look fun/errotic/heroic. We need more writers like you!
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that\o sao sad! And he's so young!!! I almost cried! *tear* Please contine! I would really like to know how this affects Yusuke in the years to come.
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, interesting concept indeed. Sensui, Yusuke's abusive father (stepfather). It sounds like it would be a great series, but it may be harder to pull off if you keep the chacacter's at such a young age. Though, you could use this chapter as a dream/nightmare/memory of sorts, having older, teenage Yuusuke waking up. Could do this before the Sensui saga too, have Yuusuke flip out when he comes back. Plus, it could be good stuff for a possible Yusukexsomeone pairing *cough Kuwabara!cough* >_>.....
*stop ranting* But whatever you do is cool too. ^^;;
*stop ranting* But whatever you do is cool too. ^^;;
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No no no no no no no no no! Not Yusuke! No! No! No! NO! Yusuke is cool...and nice..and *rube away! screaming and crying to her mommy becasue Yusuke is etting abused by some nut!* In the series, I HATE Sensui! I HATE HIM! I HATE HIM! I HATE HIM! Poor little Yusuke. And yes! We adults need to doethiething about the whole child molng sng stuff! I see things like that on the six o'clock news! And it really pisses me off! Children are our future! We should take care of them! Child molesting is wrong all the way around anyway! ~Yamistar
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You should defina mak make this a series because people do ignore the signs and sometimes help comes too late. Also, the plot seems very well thought out and well written. I love how you put the lulluby as the song for the prolouge, gave it a certain mood. Anyway, update soon =]