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for Don't Say A Word

by serenestorm

person Rosewhip Babe
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is really good. I think you should make it a series. I would like to know how Yusuke deals with his problem and what will happen to his dad. I'm totally not for or get a kick out of molestation, but I agree with you, If we get it out in the open, it wont be as......well, not as bad, but not as uncommon a topic to talk and/or read about. Are you only going to write it when Yusuke is asleep, or will you have him go to school, and stil hang with his friends. I think it would be interesting to see what you would come up with for their responses, because I can't possibly fathom what they would say/do. Please e-mail me if you want to comment on anything or feel like answering my questions. Thanx, Sam
person jess
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was frikkin good! you have to write another chapter! i want to know what happens next!
person Gothicjester
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story you should definetly update it.
person Angelica
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was really good but really sad. you should definetly make this a series. i think that you did a good job on it keep going. i can't wait for the next chapter.
person kit-kit
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i was looking around and i caught your story i think you should make it a series. we need stories like these because in this world things like this really happen and we need to stop ignoring the signs of it. though yusuke being how young he is may give you a problem and make you have to limit some things so maybe you can make him older in your next chapter. also i can't wait to see who yusuke falls in love with because i'm sure that person will be the one to protect him.
person shini
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its different from other storys i have read. an i like that. its totally original!! please continue. i would like to see what happens!!^_^!!please update sooon!!!
person dark vampire
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
bahh!! evil! you can't stop there, someone has to come and save yusuke!!! please please write more sooN!
person rheanen
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is very dark it a good strat write more poor yusuke
person Katie
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! nice fic! I can't wait till you get your next chapter is up so hurry!!! ^_^ and you're right..things like that do happen saddly. I had a pastor who did that =/ anyways..good fic! hurry up and write the next chapter please! ^_^
person Kira
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LUV IT !! PLease continue and write more!!