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for Just Between Us Friends

by cillaxox

person Altar of Wishes
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah:

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The door opened behind the two boys, they turned around and saw Ms. Minamino, “Shuuici you’re missing your party.
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You spelled Shuuichi wrong.
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter a lot. Especially the stuggle Kurama was having with Yoko inside his head. Can't wait for the next chapter. I love Yus/Kurama pairings. I'm currently working on a Yus/Kurama fic too. Good luck with the next chappie. I'll be waiting to read it.
person Altar of Wishes
schedule October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just as long as you're contented with the time you allot yourself. A y shy should only take as long as you want it.
person Kugatsu
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was a great story...i think we need hat hat happens to Hiei" chapter
person Altar
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have no CC for you. I'm afraid that I have to say that you're making me like Kurama.
person Emme
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great continuation of the story. You are very good with sex scenes that are not dirty. Kept me interested. I can't wait to see more.
person Nina
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love Kur/Yus pairings. I read the first story "A Rose..." and I was happy to see that you revised it and continued the story with this chapter. I look forward to more. Great job.