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for Twister

by mocha

person Johnny M
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so kick ass. So well written and an awesome plot. I'm going on to Ch. 2. Can't wait!!
person Johnny M
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was great. I've never read a sub-Hiei story, and I have to say I rather enjoy it. Onward!!
person ko-krama
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, Twister was so awesome- thanks for writing such a wonderful YYH fan fic. Hopefully there'll be more chapters but, if there won't be.o pro problem.

I noticed they're becoming rare, good YYH stories I mean. Of course, it's always exciting to find talented authors that have a knack for writing refreshing YYH stories... but I have to cut that talk short, I'm beginning to ramble and probably not making much sense either... Oh well, you get the idea. (U_U)

Anyways, looking forward to reading whatever your talented mind happens to dish out. Kudos v(^_~)v

Love,
Ko-krama
person Keiko Yukimora
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Too many spaces!! O_o Man this is a good story!!!
person jojo
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man! Well I'm never be able to play twister the same way again let alone look at it. Good job I just luv it when kurama and hiei start doing it like rabbits hehehe(^_^;) Oh! I know maybe they should play a nice and neat possibly somehow turn down and dirty game of simon says.
person KuramaKitsune
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow thats some great writing you got there keep up the good work!
person The Yaoi Fairie
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee! I loved it!!! I was gonna ask if you had to take out a twister mat to refer to... A very well-researched fic!!!!!!
person Pure Evil
schedule July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooo sexy idea of our 2 fave YYH demons playing a sweaty gme of twister! what will you think of neaxt?
person ko-krama
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn * ko*
person comicfancat
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is to cool,and the 3rd chapter was worth the wait.Is there going to be any more? Hope so! Can't wait to find out