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by mocha

person FluffyFox
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How about using...Clue? Operation? Tag? Freeze Tag? Monopoly? Life? Tic Tack Toe? There's a few for ur prevertedness! Thanks for degrading those games, it was well worth it!

Ja Ne!
person AnnaJaganshi
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO That was killer, macho! I think I died laughing then came back to find out what happens next. But otherwise, it was a spectacal!

Hmm... other games? ... Uhm... how about break dancing? And they somehow make it into a sex game? *shrugs* I don't know, but you have silly and great ideas as it is! UPDATE PLEASE!!!
person Akela
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eh... ill finish chapters 3 and 4 tomorrow.... good so far, though... im just too sleepy to keep my eyes open...
person Anon
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow........yummy just yummy epecially that last chapter. ::PUrrs::
person Suicidal Skies
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
XD..I love it so much XD what *wonderful* things to do with games...*cackles* XD its so great and yummy XD..and oh the uses for chocolate...mm XD..before I go into my lil fangul momento XD I say..great job and *__*;;;;
person Raging Pheonix
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was hilarious and... well you know.
person Raging Pheonix
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Some people have interesting minds.
person Yotama
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've read stories, then I've read STORIES. This was creative and was VERY amusing. I think you should continue writing them!

P.S-I found no mistakes in spelling that made me go ballistic! Good job for you!
person inumoon3
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh this story is good! And maybe for a suggestion I think you should have them play hide 'n' seek or maybe red light green light 123! I think that would be extremely cute!!! Oh and maybe just a quick round of truth and dare!!! Update soon!
person Nyktavykta
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As usual, Mocha dahling, I luffed it! That was sweet and lemony in more than three ways. ^_^ Any way, please update soon! I always adore their little games...hmm...well, it is drawing near halloween, so you could make them bob for apples or something. That was always suggestive enough to make me twitch and giggle at parties. ^_^ Good luck!