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for Pained

by LadyDais

person Eternal Light/Fire Dragon
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great.Very funny.Please update soon. Arigatou!
JA NE! :3
person RoseDreamAara
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*drool* Damn Touya is soooo hot. This is a really good story and I can't wait till you update. Ja.
person Birdy06
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far.Please update soon. Arigatou!
JA NE!
person angelbaby
schedule September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Pained" is great! I think the Toguro brothers should rescue Rage just in the nick of time. Hasn't the wom woman been through enough? Please update soon. Good luck!!!
person Mithryl
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Never liked Pegasus and Touya's always been a fav of mine! Keep it up! I also like the idea for Touya to come in before anything happens, course, poor Pegasus would be creamed, but such is life. It's all up to you as the author.

Have fun!
person Ayumi
schedule August 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think she should be paired with Touya. That would be my choice anyway. I'm thinking about writing a fanfiction for my OC and Touya, if you have any ideas, plz email them to me. until then, Ja ne!
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story.