rate_review Reviews

My reveiw will be long since I just read the whole thing in one sitting. It took me 2 hrs, but I finished reading your story. It was so good that once I got started I couldn't bring myself to stop reading. I like the direction your taking this story in. Also the way you weave parts from the cartoon and the manga in with the original story is a nice touch. Oftern times I found myself reading along and thinking, 'Yeah that's right,' or 'I remember that.' I've read other stories that point out how Yusuke, Hiei & Kurama don't know much about Kuwabara and that they are kinda mean to them, but you actually did something about it, kudos! The way you elaborate Kuwa's powers is awesome. Plus you pointed out how since he is part of a street gang he is held to a different set of rules, I though that was pretty cool of you to do so. I wasn't bothered by the gory scenes, because they fitted in with the story. I like the Botan/Kuwa/Yukina triangle. I always thought it was odd that he got over Botan so quickly.

I loved everything about this story! Each chapter was well-written and I could tell you put a lot of thought into each one. There aren't enough +s to rate how good this is. I am very much so looking forward to the next chapter.

Good luck with the rest of your story.
cillaxox

LOL! That was funny, dark and warm all at the same time! Hmm... Kazuma's Bday? I usually make in late March/early April 'cause he seems like an Aries to me. Other times I give the October/November thing.... Scorpio— 'cause he's like that sometimes.

I do know that Kurama's Libra. It's written all over him. Plus, Libras are associated with roses.

That was excellent! I loved the humor in it, I still love it being dark. You are such a talented writer! This is getting really good and I can't wait to read more of it! Please continue and update as soon as you can!

This is a great chapter! I can't wait to read more! Plesae hurry with the next chapter!! :)

Ohhhhhhhhh! This story gets better and better as time goes on! I love what you've done to Kuwa-love. Love how you matured him and how now everyone [Friends] have to reevaluate what they thought they knew about him. I tell you, thats a sure fire way to keep everyone on their toes. This last chapter was cute. I now have hope for some porn! Man, Kuwabara and Yukina porn is always wanted and desired, but to get some Botan / Kuwabara porn, I might just actually kill someone for it. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Kenya

Hey, great chapter! I was laguhing so hard at Kazuma and Botan embarrassment moment that I fell off my chair. I think I hit head on something but I love how much Botan knews about Kazuma and his favorite book, did you came up with that one? I can't wait for the next chapter. And please no Botan/Kazuma/Yukina just a Botan/Kazuma. Only Altar of wihes has a Botan/Kazuma fic.

That was great! I loved it! Kuwabara showed the gang (Yusuke, Hiei, and Kurama) what he's made of! You go Kuwabara! He kicked butt! I loved how you had Kuwabara find out the truth by having him watch the memory in the guy's mind. How is the gang going to treat him now that they watched him kill two humans? I can't for you to update and I hope your writers block ends soon!

Wow! Man those poor guys! To bad the two asses didn't suffer more then they did! They should have felt the same pain and fear the other three felt! Any way this was a great chapter! I can't wait to read more! Plesae hurry with the next chapter!! :)

Hey... I like how this is fitting! The dialogue and the slang/street terms and you indulge in every part of the mangas/animes! I just love the way that this dark-fic is bringing out the true street wise and honorable Kuwabara!

Why haven't you updated a new chapter? I love the editting you did, but where's the next chapter? I'm dying here! Please update soon or I'll just pull out all my hair!